Student Name: @bhaiaslam
Overall grade: 9.3
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: no
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Provided the course of action in this specific situation . Good work | Important details are missing such as the student didn't mention prioritizing their own safety first. This is a very important step. There's no mention of gloves or a wrapper. | [Grade: 1.9] |
| Question 2 | the student listed down the course of action for an electrical burn. | The medical emergency team should be called immediately. | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 3 | Listed the steps of managing an emergency chemical burning scenario. | The reason listed is wrong. The thing that went wrong was that the burn site wasn't flushed for a longer period of time. It is interesting to read a different perspective from you. Not a lot of students gave the alternatives of sand or soil | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 4 | The student managed to present their logic in choosing the answer. | The ethics as well as the Triage dictate that the patient with a 2nd degree burn should be treated first as the patient with a third degree burn has his nerves damaged so currently he is not in severe pain whereas the patient with a 2nd degree burn might be going through excruciating pain and if not attended immediately would be left with grave consequences | [Grade: 1.8] |
| Question 5 | the student managed to present an infographic. Infographics in the medicine field serve as important tool for having access to more information in a single place. These are typically necessary to have as a first aider. | [Grade: 2] |
General Feedback: The student has shown a good understanding of this week's course. I definitely enjoyed reading your article. There were a few shortcomings which I'm sure will be avoided in the upcoming posts.
Thank you.
Regards,
@huzaifanaveed1
Assalam-o-Alaikum!
Dear @huzaifanaveed1,
Thank You very much for your reply.
Your reply is a moment of pleasure for me.
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Walaikum Assalam.
Aslam bhai kya haal hain aapke umeed karta hu khairiat se honge. Bohat khushi hoti hai ye dekh ke, ke students enthusiasm show karte hain aor aage se question bhi karte hain jab unhe koi confusion hoti hai toh. It's also a pleasure to read that you're a health department employee. It's always a pleasure to see my fellow countrymen doing good. Now coming towards your question.
Though Person A, who has third-degree burns, needs more attention than Person B, who has second-degree burns, we have to consider the following:
The situation
The environment
The consequences
Person A, with third-degree burns, will likely require surgery, possibly a skin graft, which cannot be performed in a rural area. Since they are calm, their condition can be managed momentarily.
On the other hand, Person B, with second-degree burns, is experiencing excruciating pain and deserves immediate medical intervention. If this is not provided, it could result in serious complications. According to the Law of Beneficence, priority should be given to the patient who can benefit the most from immediate attention. In such an environment, there isn’t much you can do for the person with third-degree burns, is there?
I hope that clarifies the situation
Regards,
Dr Huzaifa Naveed
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Thank You very much for this comment. Your way of talking is imposing.
May you live long and happily.
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