I think you wrote well, but I suggest avoiding excessive use of emoticons in posts, for an article it is not good to use it if it is too dominant, but only for certain parts and are considered important it is permissible.

The interaction you have is very low, I hope you can improve it for the better because the nature of engagement is not only the content of quality content, but how the writer is able to interact well with other users

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