Between fear and hope

in hive-161155 •  9 days ago 
It's Post in my Task Two In the challenge of freewriting. I am hopeful that I will get a good feedback on this task as before. I am grateful for @inspiracion and @wakeupkitty for this unique and unique activation.


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Even after seeing this, I remembered the condensation I am nowadays. I am in touch with a man who wants to do a lot of good work. For this purpose we sometimes have contact on the WhatsApp, or on call. When I see that he has seen my message on the WhatsApp or I know he is now talking to me on the phone. In the category of the main purpose we have to achieve. So I have to be introduced to a wave of happiness that is unable to be described. I feel happy as if I see the water flowing. This joy is like a wooden plaque in the hand of a suddenly drowning man. This happiness can be like us as we know when someone starts to slaughter a slap and then stop it suddenly, or we can stop his hand or we can stop it. It would not be a pleasure, but he would call it a ray of hope immediately after fear. But happiness will be achieved as soon as we will survive. This feeling of happiness is an indication that we too have feelings. There is an idiom in Urdu: the heart is jumping like cats.

On the other hand:
The condition of the heart is also something like it seems very scary, why is it so? That I am thinking of myself from the other side as well. That if I have to fear due to the circumstances, what will that fear be like? If I accidentally stray from the path that my Maker has told me to walk, what will happen to me?

The fear is not that I will be punished, Indeed I am afraid of that, but more than that, that he will be angry with me, who created me, he is my creator.

Similarly, there is a fear when I want to talk to someone about something and fear that the answer will come against my hope, even if there is hope. But be afraid.


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Dear friend,

Thank you for your entry but unfortunately what you wrote is not a story of 100 words that fits to the picture (for more information see the contest hosted by @freewritehouse).

What also misses is : Describe the picture" and "Describe what you feel if you look at the picture". This is what we practised in Task 1.

I invite you to have a look at other entries to see what they wrote and get ideas of what #pic1000 can look like.

I thank you and wish you a great day, the report you find in the comment section.

I thought this contest id going to be free writing contest, but it's full with restrictions, I'm out. Sadly. Bye @wakeupkitty. I noticed another thing too on my previous task, first the rating was 8 and then I got only 3. I can't understand what's going on.

These are lessons and they have to follow certain rules set by the Steemit Team. It's the same for the points given. This wasn't our choice. Since there are 6 lessons this means the basics should be explained and practiced so everyone can learn how to free write. Is it about free writing alone? No. Since the focus is also on using the right hashtags, the title, and other aspects with the result is that even if you can't write you can still have a higher score.
If the points were given for the text only it would look completely different, that is for sure.
For now, I can't change much but with the next lesson, I like to see bonus points (even though 10 is the maximum). This is the only way to add more value to what is written. This has to be tried out but I think it's possible and also fair, at least that is how I see it.

But still I don't understand how and why the rating got changed from 8 to 3. In my first post, if that was a mistake why this much big mistake happens. Why we feel happiest for once with 8 and then we have to lost everything when we see 3 sudden

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