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Rachel, a time traveler, found herself at the end of her journey in a gloomy gray world. Her blue jacket stood out loudly against the gray clothing of those around her. She had fallen into a crowded alley.
Rachel was afraid that everyone would look at her and point at her. But the strange thing is that nobody seemed to see it, apparently all suffered from color blindness and did not perceive the color blue.
Was it the characteristic of this gray world? -She thought.
The truth is that she felt safe, because they went unnoticed in the crowd. She could accomplish her mission without risk to her safety.
She activated the recorder and began to speak very softly, but was immediately interrupted, because all of their heads turned towards her, searching for the author of the articulate sounds.
Apparently they did not perceive colors, but they had an acute auditory sensitivity that allowed them to discriminate the sound of her voice among the multitude of noises that populate the street.
The young woman must have proceeded to her own extraction. Fear had won over her departure, but she gathered important information in a few minutes.
♥This is my entry to the CONTEST: A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words - 5/21/2021. Thanks to @gertu and @reinaldoverdu for inviting me, in turn I invite @lanzjoseg and @purrix to participate.
♥ I used google translator to help me with the english translation
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Very well achieved your story, you have used the narrative techniques in a great way creating a great environment with all the requirements that a micro story must have.
I really like this work, my congratulations, it is of good quality.
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Thanks a lot for your very nice words and your appreciation of my work, @reinaldoverdu
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What a great article you have done. I love reading. I enjoyed the mystery of not seeing colors but heart the sounds.
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haha Something had to be invented to give it a dramatic touch
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Parece un episodio de una película, jeje
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Jeje
Así lo ví, como un episodio de un viaje en el tiempo,
explorando mundos
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Very original. Thanks for joining us. We hope to read more from you. 👍
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Thank you
I liked the initiative.
I will continue participating
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