This is a creative entry, and the start was enjoyable and funny, which is good to make one read on.
I read the comments as well and I don't think there's need to worry. Death is a part of our lives and it's good to mention her/him in a light way.

Hashtags: it is not allowed to use the hashtag contest since you do not host a contest. This is considered hashtag abuse. Will you please remove it. Thank you.