Art Explained By A Writer: Five Writers (1902-1903)

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How to Escape

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Look at them
One, two, three, four
Boring men
All copycats.


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Five writers (1902-1903) - Félix Vallotton


How full they are with themselves
They don't stop praising
Lifting
Their 'art'.

Gesturing
Pronouncing words
Words, phrases, sentences
Not meant for the reader to understand.

Words, words, words, more words
Meaningless
Dead chats
I wish I stayed home

Four men
Not too smart
Far from attractive
Narcissists with beards

How did I end up with this quartet?
Beards, bears, black and red
The love of my life sold her soul
She will leave me because of them.

Why do I hide
Pretend
Follow
The club of boring writers?

The president can't write himself
Each one of them has a ghostwriter
Why do they brag about talent
Is the achievement caused by the right hand?

One slick after the other
They did it, feel no shame
Here I stand as a member
Invited, still an outsider

Will I be like them?
Am I already?
What will Sophia think if I throw the towel?
I get a shave as soon as I am out of here.

Ten months with them is too long
I have to escape before I change
I can't be one of the boys.


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Header/Photogrid: Canva
Picture: public domain - contest by @solperez
Prompt: escape @freewritehouse
12-7-2024
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En este poema has abordado el tema de los círculos cerrados; esos que visten, hablan y actúan de manera distinta a los demás. Pero eso no es lo más grave, sino el hermetismo como actitud para no dejar que nadie se acerque a ellos o pretendan igualarlos.

Por eso se muestran soberbios; y esto abruma a cualquier mortal que no desea lanzarse a esa piscina con tibuirones, jeje.

Me encantó leerte.

Círculos como ése es mejor evitar. Por mucho que uno se esfuerce, ser aceptado, respetado no está en ello.

Debe ser una vida agotadora la de esos hombres con barba.

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Así es. He conocido muchos círculos así, y siempre me he cuidado de no entrar en ellos, y también de no convertirme en uno de ellos. Saludos.

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