(Image- A Day in the Life by MorrisoN)
dead things move among us…
but we do not know it.
we meet them
ruffling through parking lots and shopping malls,
shuffling in shrouded retrograde,
their heads held low
against the palls of life
and loss
and mummifying winds
and us
their cloudy faces turning toward the sun of our “hellos,”
excavating for us hollow smiles
from the stormy spaces
behind their scarab eyes…
and on our train rides home,
day blueing fast, night slowly rolling in,
suburbia rumbling into view in grainy blurs,
they lift their cur-eared mysteries
concealing their elusive histories
behind the rocking, reeling ciphers...
their faces stony sepulchers, their mocking, toothy, caverns
spitting echoing refrains of “ooh” and “ahh”
and “hahaha… haha”
trying to hide their ancient inner embers’
fading out…
until before you know
the blue has deepened down to dark
and they arise to disembark…
whispering their “goodbye's" around averted faces
as they go,
their eyes intent to find their homey spaces,
where they shall hover o’er their comfy chairs,
and chew their tasteless sustenance,
and sip their quenchless beverages,
and peer into their depths, searching for
the inks of ages
written in the hieroglyphic night
upon what is left of the hell-bent moths,
crashing against
the ankh
of the bare porch light…
searching, blindly, through their dusty throes,
straining their minds to remember those
wondrous days,
when they were new…
just wide-eyed kids…
giggling in the shadows
of the pyramids.
Hey this is great! Heart stopping then crashing then remembering the giggling.
It ends on both a hopeless and hopeful note. Very nice work.
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This is fabulous. Why can I not get to any of your other work?
Anyway, shuffling and crashing and giggling and ending somehow on a both hopeless and hopeful note. Really great work. So who are you?
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dear owasco...
thank you so much for your very kind words.
to answer your question of who i am, at this point i can say only that i am new to actually posting on Steemit and slowly easing my toe into Steemit's uncharted waters, trying to find my self-confidence- which is one of the reasons i have done nothing but post the two poems i have.
the other reason is that i simply do not know what to say. i am a visual artist, a poet and a short story writer but, as i am (due to circumstances) presently unable to create visual art, i am attempting to re-confirm my (due to circumstances) also somewhat lost identity as poet/writer.
i hope i have answered at least some question for you and, that said- again- i really mean it: i am humbled by your so generous and thoughtful attention.
camnine
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