Hello @freshegg you are welcome on this amazing platform. And I know with your zeal to learn and read you'll have enough to be fed on. Here we have a cameroon community and among us are very prominent and prolific writers you might like to follow in the likes of; @drumblac @craxywriter, @rosita-nkefor and many others. As a matter of fact, we also have hairdressers here and great dancers. You'll enjoy yourself for sure. Welcome

And as regards to your post, a greeter has already pointed out some faults. Your picture isn't clear, your tags are still a little empty and need editing.