Hello, Thank you for submitting your Achievement task.
Most of the text in your task is similar to this publication and has been paraphrased in several places.
Although both of you have taken help from the same mentor but you need to submit work reflecting your understanding and learning. I invite you to edit this task and submit it according to your understanding. Reply to this comment when you are done. Thank you.
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Thank you for your assessment on my Achievement task. It was never a paraphrase of another publication but rather a reflection of the language usage by our mentor while mentoring us.
You know, just like a child in a primary school feels better using his teacher choices of words in teaching because he wants to pass his course, even so did I as a newbie in the Steemit platform.
I have edited and made some adjustments on my publication reflecting my understanding and learning. Please do reassess my task so as to verify it.
Thank you for your continued support and encouragement
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Good day sir,
Thank you for your assessment on my Archievement 2 task. My task was never a paraphrase of another publication but rather a reflection of the language usage by our mentor during our mentorship.
You know, just like a child in a primary school feels better expressing his understanding of what his taught him during exam, even so did I as a newbie in the Steemit platform.
I have edited my task to reflect my understanding and learning. Please reassess and verify my Achievement 2 task.
Thank you
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