The breathtaking vastness of the river spread under the blue horizon. Silently following water was looking around with its halting breaths but found no one around except me and the intense silence. Why I was there? To get rid of suffocation which spreads in the crowds.
River is one of the marvellous listeners with the best empathetic skills. River banks, The laps where humanity flourished and settled. The magnificent civilizations were born on River verges, and then the flowing waters took them back into their calm wombs like a possessive mother. The glorious riverine provides a fertile land to nurture love stories. Yes, I love the miraculous amor sprout on riversides.
The one which emerged from the pen of Mustansar Hussain Tarer. Mustansar Hussain، who wrote "Pyar ka pahla Shar"( The First City of Love). But the write-up, which is the face of his bounding way of writing, is Bhao (loosely you can say "the flow," and an official English translation is available with the title of The Lost River). That very novel is not a typical love story but mirrors a bond between sapiens and the rivers.
The affection among the folks who were born, raised, and dead on the water's edge in Thar (desert) and the only river in their lives is described in a way which you can connect. The innocent (or somehow foolish) characters of Mustansar Hussain know that the dear river of Srasvati is going to evaporate soon, not only from their lives but also from the land. And still, they don't believe in naked reality. Like us, when a loved one is going to migrate from our lives.
We just close our eyes and say to ourselves that they never will, or maybe we perceive their intentions in the wrong way. However, deep down, we know that they will do whatever they want to do. We can't make them stay as can't control the river's flow. The water which passed once never flowed again. The characters who once went out from the stage of this world never came back. Of course, they are not affected by the intense desires which we have.
The land may have survived without rivers, but it lost the hustle which kept it alive. Perhaps the same thing happened with humans, who survived, but the part which they lost due to oblivion of their near and dears can never join them again. Water flows, and so does life. I don't know if it is for good or bad. But that is the rule or our fate decided by the ultimate circumstances. So we go with the flow because if we stop and wait, the river will ruin whatever comes its way.
@sur-riti , @iqrabatool34 and
@sojib1996 would you guys like to paint a story?
Hello my wonderful friend,
I always like your style of expression, I had not heard of "Pyar Ka Shaher" and I did not like romantic novels a little. That is why my interest remained on fast-paced crime, stunt, detective and science fiction.
میری دعا ہے کہ میرا پڑوسی ہمیشہ خوش اور آباد رہے، چاہے وہ کراچی ہو یا ایبٹ آباد۔
But now I have become used to writing all kinds of stories in my short stories.
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Your this friend is not from karachi or abbotabad🤣 Guess where is she from?
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I was just joking, I know she is from Sargodha District. Am I right.
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You're a true friend then:)
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Yes my dear friend , I am a true friend and well wisher of her.
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Your writing is becoming versatile day by day and has deep meanings? Ziyada phalsafa prh k dimag to ko ni khrab ho gya?🤣
Just kidding and mimicking faiza, you know her?
By the way, i have read niklay teri talash m of mustanser tarar. It was ammmm good, my brother brought it from the school library, and at that time i used to read any urdu book we have hard copy of.
Isn't it wholesome to read what we have near us instead of constantly looking for new books just for the sake of collecting them.
I wish someone gift me a library full of classic books😭❤👀
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Rivers help us unwind when we're stressed. We can voice all of our grievances to the river because it attentively hears them. In a river, tales of love can blossom. I appreciate your artistic style. Good luck with the contest. Thank you for participating.
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