Hello my steemian friends,
This is my participation in the contest” 66th STORY WRITING COMPETITION. / "Missing" organised by @fjjrg in Scouts and Friends
Here is where your story begins:-
Jonas Gutierrez, left his house that morning to go to work on foot. The doctor had advised him to exercise and walk daily, and so he made it part of his routine. Halfway he stopped to buy coffee and a newspaper and then went to work. His assistant Lucia said that that morning was different, when she arrived he was already spending time in his office, otherwise, he was upstairs talking to Mr. Adonis (the owner of the company), which was normal and sometimes took hours.
At around 11 am, Mr. Adonis arrives and tells Lucia to tell Jonas to go up to talk to him, Lucia stops him and says: - Mr. Adonis, I thought I was with you. He replies, no, I'm coming back from the doctor, I had an appointment, please tell him to come up, it's urgent. Lucia is shocked and looks for him in his office and all over the apartment, but she can't find him, this is very unusual, Mr. Jonas never missed work and was always one of the first to arrive. She calls the reception and asks him to come and the receptionist tells her that she didn't see him arrive. Lucia calls him on his phone and rings several times but there is no answer. He tries again and again, but nothing. He calls Mr. Adonis and tells him that he can't contact him, to which he replies that it can't be, they talked before and agreed to meet at the office.
Lucia keeps trying to communicate, she keeps calling him, she calls him at home, she calls her son and no one knows where he is. Suddenly they call her, but it was not him...
Now my story continues:-
As soon as the anxious Lucia received the phone call, she heard someone else's voice on the phone. Lucia's heart started beating very fast with the fear of some evil, yet she kept her composure and asked the caller,
"Who are you? And why do you have this mobile phone." Where is the owner of this phone?
The caller got nervous after hearing so many questions at once. He said to Lucia, "Madam, I am the gardener of the park. When I reached my duty this morning, I found this phone lying on the bench of the park. Perhaps its owner must have forgotten it here. Just now I was going to deposit it in the lost and found department when it started ringing and I was getting your calls continuously, so I thought it necessary to call you back. "
Lucia said, "You wait there, we are coming to get the phone". This is the mobile phone of one of our office employees. We are very worried about him."
Saying this, Lucia disconnects the call and tells the entire conversation to her boss Adonis.
Adonis also gets surprised to hear all this and says to Lucia, "Let's go to the park quickly and find out the matter." "Don't know what happened to Jonas?"
Both of them immediately left the office and reached the park on foot. The distance from the office to the park was only 5 minutes. There they found the gardener and reached the bench where the gardener had found the phone. Even in such a hurry, Lucia had brought a photo of Jonas with her in her handbag.
Lucia showed that picture to many people present in the park and started asking about Jonas. An old man who had come for a walk there recognized the picture and said, "Yes, this is Jonas. He comes to the park every day and had come today as well. He had just stayed for a while when he had a heart attack. Some of us immediately called an ambulance and sent him to the city hospital. He was taken to the hospital just 1 hour ago."
On hearing this, Lucia and Adonis took a taxi from there and reached the city hospital. On the way, they informed Jonas's son and wife about Jonas' illness through a mobile phone.
On reaching the city hospital, they both came to know from the emergency doctors that Jonas was brought to the emergency room an hour ago, he was given first aid there, now Jonas is fine but he has been kept in ICCU [Intensive Cardiac Care Unit] for monitoring for 48 hours where no one was allowed to meet him.
Lucia and Adonis heaved a sigh of relief and started waiting for Jonas' wife and his son to come.
I also want to invite here @tammanna @suryati1 and @zisha-hafiz and thanks to @senehasa who invited me.
Thanks for reading my story, I pray to God for the progress and happy future of all Steemians.
Sur-riti❤️
How are you brother? I hope you are well and today you presented a great story. The story was very surprising and scary. It seemed like it was on the next line and it was a lot of fun to read. It was very good to read it in the end and the end of the story was very beautiful. Many blessings to you. Please present more beautiful stories to us.
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Thank You very much SIS,
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Thank you so much for accepting my invitation and participating in the contest. With your story, you describe what happened to Jonas. As Jonas is a heart patient, you provide a new perspective on the story. Amazing!
Good luck with the contest.
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Thank You very much friend for inviting me, reading my story and commenting so nice.
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You are welcome.
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Hello @sur-riti, knowing Jonas's state of health, it was very likely that some ailment had occurred, thanks to Lucía's concern, they were able to find him quickly.
I loved reading your writing. A happy ending because Jonas appeared.
Greetings.
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting so nice .
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