Weekly Contest : CREATING SHORT STORY Week 12 @daprado1999

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Fictional stories are meant to thrill the listeners and hold up suspense for its readers. I hope mine captivates you. Sit back relax and enjoy my fictional story. You can share your reactions and ratings too.

MARRIAGE GONE SOUR

It all started at the fall of the year. The family of the Ed's were just settling into the city after a long vacation. They enjoyed themselves during their honeymoon and they couldn't get enough of themselves too. They moved into the block and where settling in so well.

Edward loved his wife so much and professed it almost the whole time to her. It all ends in actions. To love someone most times cost no much dime. But sacrifice is the main issue to share with your lover.

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A fortnight after they moved in at about 11:00pm hell was let loose at the Ed's.They heard a shattering noise likened to shattered glass. They ran out to the living room they room was dark already. He reached out for the lights and he was welcomed to seated masked robbers....Pointing a Pistol revolver gun at the duo. They couple exchanged glances and gaped mouths....broke down almost immediately to slow sobs.

Mr. Ed was handed the gun by the chief of the gang and ordered to shoot his beloved wife! He immediately looked her in the eye, turned and shuddered saying he cannot hurt his missing piece. He was threatened but he didn't do it.

The same event occurred as the gun was taken and given to Mrs. Ed. She looked him in the eye and said I'm truly sorry and clicked on the trigger...it was an empty magazine too on the pistol!! What a test to their marriage. The gang took the gun and left laughing mischievously.

I can hear your review too if you read my story too

may the best contestant win the contest

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Amor no correspondido que triste historia

Greetings my friend @daprado1999

Interesting story about a couple who in the middle of their honeymoon had the opportunity to show their love, the woman being the one who gave less importance to their relationship.

Thank you for your entry to the contest.

Participant #2

@adeljose thanks for stopping by