I'm more impressed with your formatting than your story—which I'm sure you will improve further. After all, it's your first attempt at creative writing.
For all newbies, what I recommended to Mudassir was reading and learning from other people's posts. For formatting, I recommended these:
https://steemit.com/steemit/@shieha/want-to-align-to-the-right-or-to-the-left-in-steemit-here-s-how
https://steemit.com/utopian-io/@shieha/steemit-tutorial-text-and-images-alignment-options
And a few other.
What amuses me most is your use of this code and the context in which you applied it. Good job!
All the
planet destroyershumans had went to mars and abandoned earth (after they polluted
P.S: anyone who doesn't know how to use this code, here's a little help: