Good attempt! Please I want to be sure if this is diary game, since the content isn't specifically describing your diary game activities, but it was rather narrating the history of Dagonbas, hence more culture specific. Then I will suggest you change the title of your post and reframe it.

I am not sure you were also trying to enter the contest organized by @delakloe. Then you have to do something about it.

I could see you are also doing well reaching achievement task 4. Please you can proceed to complete all the Achievement for more attention.

My pleasure 😃, CR - Ghana!