The Diary Game 09/09/2021

in hive-195150 •  3 years ago 

I great you all my beautiful steemit world for I am delighted this moment to share with you guys my diary game. Getting up in the morning my mom had already started preparing cocoyam for us to pound achu and she called for me to come help her peal the cocoyam and banana while does the pounding, while I was peal one of my kid brother who was not feeling to well since he the day he came back from Douala for holidays but we bought paracetamol for him to drink thinking it was not that serious but my Dad decided he will take him to the hospital meanwhile it was supposed to be his second day in school but my ask him not to go meanwhile he was already dressed up for school and while I was peeling the cocoyam I gave some to him and he ate after which my Dad took him to preventive hospital Bamenda for checkup and after I and my mom finnish with the achu I decided to mop the floor.

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After mopping the food was already ready and all of a sudden my mom received a call from my Dad telling her that he is at the casualty general hospital with my kid brother who was transferred there and this was about 2pm and my mom was supposed to be at her market place a d she asked me to go and assist my my at the hospital and about 5pm I called my Dad to know how far things are going at the hospital and he told me the are still at the casualty so I decided to go join him and as soon as I arrived at the hospital the asked me to take my kid brother to the children's word that he will be admitted.

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While he was admitted my mom came to the hospital after market and the both went home with my Dad and I was to sleep at the hospital to take care of my kid brother meanwhile it is something I have never tried in my life but I had no choice because blood is thicker than water. But all pray for now is for quick recovery so that I can go back home and have a good rest and my brother continue with school. I thank you all reading.

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It's great you are helping out your mom at home.

Merde, how did things escalate until your brother is now in the casualty?😰 I pray that he triumphs over whatever is bothering him at such a time. Do take care of him.

I have just a few notes. Please, try to shorten your sentences. Also, try to include as many paragraphs which are double spaced and punctuations to make the writing more beautiful.

Thank you. I hope the hospital is not too uncomfortable.

Oh my God! So sorry for your brother, but I believe all is working for your good. What is your bros name again?
The Lord is touching him even as i write this comment.

Your write-up is wonderful but something is gonna make it look even more beautiful.
That you first shorten your sentences, and then include punctuation marks.
While reading your post i almost lost my breathe coz i follow punctuation just like any other reader.
Thanks for understanding and God bless you

No sickness is small bro , even fever can distroy someone.helping ur mom in the kitchen was very caring and nice.sory for your kidbro hope he gets well soon

Yes bro thanks and I just pray he gets well soon cuz I can't wait to go home

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