I see you had a fun filled day there. That's awesome. But have you thought of editing your diary before posting, it will make your work look wonderful dear. Just look at this section and see, then consider checking the entire work

When I was done eat,I waited for some minutes for the food to suggest then I went to take a bath. When I was done, I went back to the parlor, replied my messages,washed some movies,then I went to bed since i had a class at 7am the next day. I did my prayers 🙏,then slept off.