Opening Sentence

in inthebeginning •  5 years ago 

This one right here, depending on what Steem front you’re using, it could be something as short as this.

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Stop!

And that’s all anyone will see. It could also be about three times that length on, for example, #steempeak and still be read without clicking on the article. But on all fronts and dapps, regardless what’s seen where and what’s not seen, what is or isn’t clicked, until you’ve inserted the first period to be recognized in your article as a pausing point, it’s an opening sentence—that one. Those are the ones that give me a tough time, even more than the title.

Topics/ideas don’t seem to hold me up, I write those down in my notepad as I think of them, there’s so many in there right now that a lot of the ones I never got to are too old to use now. Topics aren’t an issue. The bodies of these articles can be time consuming but that isn’t a surprise. Edits, trimming, the research that’s involved, attaching links and images, etc. time consuming is expected.

Opening sentences and titles—I get hung up on those. Cover images have their moments, not near as often, though, not like opening sentences. Closing sentences aren’t bad at all.

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good topic

Howdy sir dandays! Titles are what's hard for me. I come up with some really bad ones too. lol.

Man you ain’t kidding! I actually did a write up about the Title around here somewhere, did you catch? Somehow I got into a little series about how I blog—yeah, heck yeah titles ain’t no joke!

Long time no see, Janton. It’s great to hear from. Know that if I don’t stop by, I’m still thinking about you. I Wish you and the Mrs, and Jack all of the best all of the time, just know that.

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Howdy and thank you sir dandays! I am still catching up on your posts but it looks like you might actually settle down there? What are the costs like, can you easily handle them on a long term basis?

Great question. You know what sir? We actually just received Pura’s British passport yesterday (I’ll do an article about it), now it’s like “scratch all of those Park here for a minute ideas” and let’s go see Europe.

How many times have you been issued an EU passport, in the EU, and didn’t just utilize the heck out of it?!

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uh...never? I've never been out of the U.S. so I'm about as clueless as you can get! lol. But I agree, go for it because the European posts I've seen about Europe...just spectacular.

Stay tuned, I’ll be sure to keep you as informed as possible.

Happy Sunday my favorite Texan.

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I am SO looking forward to that sir dandays! You guys are living the dream!

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Thank you.

edit apparently it isn’t available for iOS yet.

Yes iOS release is in review or something

I like to just throw it out there and roll with it. Even if I do spell it wrong. Hahaha I agree the opening line is always a tough one. I give it a go about 3 times then I say screw it!! That’s the one, if they don’t like it... too bad so do I. Lol

Three times, I wish! I probably shouldn’t be admitting this here but a couple dozen +/- Times is more like it for me—dang things.

You can do your typos, we all look right passed them because you’re the coolest dad in the space. Thanks for checking this one out Splatts.

My autocorrect had ‘spacer,’ as funny as it sounds, I changed it to space.

Always nice to hear from you @jlsplatts.

I guess you are a favourite of steempeak front right

Depends. I think they all have their benefits. Steempeak is cool, partiko is convenient if you’re just responding. There’s several that have there favorable differences.

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Steempeak.com has really raised up the bar for the rest of the competition. 🙃

It’s still a little awkward uploading images. Other than that, I totally agree, that’s my go-to. Randomly getting kicked out and having to sign back in again with steemconnect, that part sucks too.

I’ve collected 6 account tickets since you let me in on a little secret. 👍🏿 Always a pleasure to hear from you @trincowski. Happy Friday.

Make that 7. 😉

I'm near 30 already.

Hey buddy, Just wondering if you are having any trouble lately with upvoting content. Earlier this morning I tried upvoting a few of the posts in this week's #fff.
After pushing the button down, everything stayed the same as far as $ and votes.
I tried it several times by removing my upvote and then again pressing down the button to try and registure that vote., no luck. this has been going on for a couple of days @dandays.
You got any ideas. thanks

I haven’t had that issue yet, I keep getting kicked out of steempeak though and I’m trying to figure out this other reward pool now because if I’m only seeing 1/2 of my vote go out, does that mean I can collect on the second half??

I’ve seen the smaller SP have more voting weight than the larger ones, I can’t explain that one either. I read an article by Justine explaining these first few weeks would be working out the kinks. At least it’s nit HF20 where none of us could even sign in for a week.

Something is going on with the reward pool too by the bid bits not buying anyone to the top of trending. However it works, it seems like our wallet values are increased even though the price of Steem is running sideways, gotta be a reward pool thing.

In answer to your question, no, but I have plenty of additionally confusing concerns to bring to your attention. 👍🏿

thanks for the reply @dandays, I will see if this issue has gotten resolved by casting a couple of upvotes and replying.
Hope your issues get straightened out.

Of course man. It’s just some fork kinks, they’ll work themselves out. Everything always works out the way it’s supposed to. Hope you guy had a great weekend.

Yup I hear ya Dan.

That part bothers me too although of late I choose titles that sometimes have around 20 or 30 words and pretty much introduce and open up the post in a comedic or maybe even ironic way, such as...

Putting My Health First, FINALLY! If At First You Don't Succeed, And All That Jazz! I WILL Find A Way To Fit This Blockchain Stuff In To My Life. AKA The Perils Of Being A Human...

This may quite possibly ((maybe even quite correctly,)) single me out as or make me to appear to people as a nutjob!

But at-least they are under no illusions before they open my post where I shall only ever reinforce this view with my nonsensical ramblings.

I am sure that it will appear interesting to many here that even though your eader says

7245 posts

You could still be plagued with doubt or even need to give pause to such matters. This only serves to illustrate the point that we are all still learning every day really and I believe that is how it should be.

Thought provoking! Take great care of you and yours my friend, until the next time I decide to throw a tonne of discombobulated half thought through words and thoughts at your comment section.

Great to hear from you @stevenwood! It’s been a little while, thanks for stopping back by and checking me out. That 7k number counts all of these posts, though, my actual post count is only at like 240. And that’s total. This is my first social media experience and trust me dude, those opening sentences kill me!

Eh, I’m glad you liked this one. I ended up doing a 4 part series to ‘how I blog’ that I randomly thought of so I ran with it and ended up really enjoying it. I just wrote the last one, it’s my Post Button one, I’ll probably release it Saturday I think. Try to stop by and check it out if you get a chance—thank you. Great to hear from you again, sir.