Un Haiku, un'immagine - Haiku, image [ITA/ENG]

in ita •  7 years ago 

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Original photo by @f3nix - 31.07.18

Cercando l'ombra -
due colombe a mezza via
come miraggi





Quest for shade -
two doves on the road,
a mirage



世の中や蝶の暮らしも忙しき - 小林一茶

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Ormai sei diventato pienamente padrone della forma haiku!
Ti segnalo una cosa su Discord che può essere interessante, oppure no ;)

Grazie Marco!! (Ero in dubbio per la similitudine). In inglese ho cercato la struttura 3-5-3 e forse va un po'meglio..buona la segnalazione, magari ci proviamo.. sai mai.

The photo and haiku are perfect together!

Thanks fishy! What a lovely surprise 😊 Soon, another fish, the banana one, will start a traditional haiku contest..

really it is good....tnx for ur amazing posting....

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Sometimes it's easier to write more than write less :-)

Wow! Another beautiful 3-5-3 haiku. Simply beautiful! : )

Thanks Win! We were quite surprised to meet those two doves in the middle of the road 🙂

I know. I got that from reading your haiku that you have mastered! : ) The doves are beautiful and so are your haiku's. So little words with so much meaning. I envy you! : )

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