[오늘의 자작시 POEM] 연기 SMOKE

in kr •  7 years ago  (edited)

저는 스팀잇을 하다가 

우연히 이런 생각이 들었습니다.

내가 살아있음을 느낄 때가 언제일까??

바람소리..

향기로운 꽃 냄새..

빛나는 태양.. 등등

언제까지 느낄 수 있을까??

이 모든 것들 중 하나라도 느끼지 못한다면,

얼마나 힘들까??


제가 느끼는 모든 것들을

시로 남겨보고 싶습니다.


그래서 

오늘의 자작시인 [연기]를 써보려합니다.


연기  Smoke 

@sechang                                 


지금 들리나요  Are  you hear me now? 

지금 맡고있나요  Are you smelling now? 

지금 보고있나요  Are you watching now? 

지금 느껴지나요 Are you feel it now?




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      ·  7 years ago 

    저도 살아있음이 왠지 느껴지는군요.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      늘 감사하며 소중히 살아야겟다는 마음이 드네요 ㅎㅎ

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          ·  7 years ago 

        저는 먹고 있을때 살아 있음을 느끼는것
        같아용ㅋㅋㅋ 자작시도 잘 읽었어용~
        맞팔하구 갑니당^^ 앞으로 자주 뵐게용~

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            ·  7 years ago (edited)

          공감공감입니다 ㅋㅋ ㅎㅎ
          앞으로 자주 뵈요~^*

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              ·  7 years ago (edited)

            전 제 생각을 밝힐 때 살아있음을?! 느끼는 것 같아요ㅎㅎㅎㅎ

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                ·  7 years ago 

              살아있음을 느낀다는 것은 정말로 행복한 것 ㅎ

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                예술가시네요 ! 시라니 ~

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  cchyyy님 스팀잇보면서 더 많이 배우도록 하겠습니다 ㅎㅎ

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    비도 오고 감성이 풍부해지는 밤이네요

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      그러게요 ㅎㅎㅋㅋ

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        오!!1 이런 의미로 쓰시는 시 굉장히 좋습니다.!!
                        감성이 저랑 잘 맞으신데요?

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          히힛 ㅎㅎ 다행이네요 ㅎㅎㅋㅋㅋㅋ 처음 써보는거라 많이 서툽니다 ㅎㅎ

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            자작시 잘 읽고 갑니다 ^^ 아 그리고 sechang님 제일 첫 포스팅의 에드센스글 제 덧글에 질문 올려뒀는데 아시는대로 답변 부탁해도 되나요?

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              넵넵! 이제야 확인해서 죄송해요 ㅠㅠ 최대한 답변 드렸는데.. 확인해주세용 ㅎㅎ 그래도 이해가 안가신다면, 한번 더 질문주세요~^^

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                자작시라니.. 글재주가 좋으세요!! 저는 자작시 써볼래도 생각이 안나서 못 쓰겠던데 ㅎㅎ

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  시간나실때 한번 도전해보세요~
                                  뭔가 감회가 새롭습니다!! ㅎㅎ

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    어릴때 불편하신 분들을 체험하는 시간을 잠시 가졌는데...
                                    정말 많이 배려하고 또 배려해야한다는 것을 느꼈었습니다...ㅎㅎ

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      그런 체험들 정말 좋은 것 같습니다! ㅎㅎ
                                      배려하고 또 배려!! GOOD입니다!!^^ ㅎㅎ

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        글로 생각을 표현한다는게 참 어려운것같네요. 글에 의미를 부여하는일..

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          저도 처음싸보는대도 어려웠네요 ㅎㅎ

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