You are not the reason for my struggles
You are not the shadows on the wall
you are not the cause for all the breaking
You are not the winter after fall
You are not to blame
For anyone else’s shame
Don’t let any other angry face shake you
Don’t allow them any room when they try to break you
You are more than
Just a habit
You don’t have to
Follow the white rabbit
You are not me
I am not you
It’s so twisted
And we argue
Until we can’t breathe
So we can believe
The love is drowned out
By loveless self doubt.
She can cry.
He can swear.
She can burst into the air
He can catch her if she is falling
Who is that calling
It starts again
Poetic Lori. Do you think it is only shes that cry? He does cry too like I did yesterday. The death of my lovely in-law crushed by a truck. Mcheeew!
Pains, tears, sorrow. God is loving and above all
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Poor thing, are you saying you just lost a family member? I am so sorry for your loss, honey. Oh my gosh. 😥😥
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Thank you. Appreciate your sympaty. Bro Sony has gone to be with the Lord. Did about 80 miles to go console my sister.
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Don't allow them any room when they try to break you, that is so true. What a wonderful poem @Lorilikes. keep it up
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Really cool lyric, it's my first time in your blog and i like your content :). You have a new follower
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wow super writting...nice pome
re-steem
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Here's Morning in my country and you made my day by posting this best tale with superb lyrics. It's quite romantic as well. ;)
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oh wow that's awesome lyrics u just write amazing thank u for sharing this stuff
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Awesome lyrics keep it up I am following you
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I must say this is really really quite impressive lyrics you made in this post. This is so deep. I'm loving to read it again and again ❤️
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Those three lines really resonated with me. Made me think back to a couple of friends I had who had mental challenges which turned their life into roller coasters of emotions. I'd try and help them, only to find ourselves right back where we started a few months later in an endless cycle.
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All familiar. True.
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Makes me think. I'm not sure what this is about, but to me it speaks of personal responsibility. And also resilience.
Whatever happened, the person is going to move on. They're not going to get stuck there. Their actions in the fall aren't going to continue into the winter. That's a new season.
Makes me think about moving on to new and better things! :)
That makes me smile.
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@themanwithnoname Which person is moving on? The one speaking or the one who is “not the shadows on the wall”?
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I took it as the speaker moving on. If it was a bad situation, they're (hopefully) physically no longer in it, but they've stopped letting what was done to them affect them. The person they're talking about no longer "lives rent-free in [the speaker's] head" as they say.
I don't know though. The latter part of the poem makes me think that the person (I would say the "she" in the poem) is in a bad situation and can't get out.
Maybe she's becoming the shadow on that person's wall after what they did.
Now I'm confused again. At least it makes me think. Apparently not clearly though. Ha ha ha
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Thanks for indulging me, it’s cool to see someone trying to decode my crazy words. Is it mean if I never reveal the meaning? I always thought bands who withheld facts about lyrics like that were cruel in a way, but oh so cool. ❤️
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Ha ha, I love it! I'm like a little hamster on my wheel. If you're entertained by my confusion, I'm good with that. I understand not revealing the meaning. Sometimes it can be very personal, so no worries.
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i like the post nice one. Thank you for sharing ♥
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well i love the lines
i like the post nice one
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What a poem man.But it's a true.
I like it man.
Thanks for share.
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this is sOooOo rOmantiC Lyrics, I reading this beautiful cOntent. Make me feel sOoOo gOod and relax !!!
Loved it !
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Once again nice poem, Once again amazing lines @lorilikes.
Lines from one of my poem -
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And how does this end? It sounds like a scary situation.
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Nobody
Nothing in the universe
Proposes
Uncovered
Indeed, even an insight
Indeed, even an impression
Not a piece of information
That would lead
Reveal
An answer.
Life in its logical inconsistency
Like the notorious apple
Offers both
The supernatural occurrence
The curse.
POEM
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@geek.phoenix I have one for you. This aligns well with your words. I think. https://steemit.com/poetry/@lorilikes/venomous-medicine-a-poetic-path-of-contrast
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Awesome poem @lorilikes.
After reading this one, i remember something, someone. Yeah it happens.
You composed this one very heartly.
Thanks for sharing.
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Oh, wow! Beautiful! And also a tinge Of something quite sad. 🌻 thank you for sharing your talent! 🌸 Thank you @geek.phoenix
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Thanks for your appreciation @lorilikes
I will write more whenever i get time for myself and for the poems.
Thanks
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wich song is it? :)
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It’s original, has not been sung yet.😅
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It's a great poem man thanks for share this poem.
I really like it.
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