Hi,

you might want to read this post here:
https://steemit.com/steemit/@shayne/steemit-tips-how-to-get-popular-comment-and-respond

Basically for the beginning just comment on stuff you find interesting
in a way that discusses what you've read. Don't explicitly ask for followers. That fires back.

Later make an post about yourself (tagged with #introduceyourself).
Search for "introduceyourself" on steemit,
There are plenty of articles giving tips about how to do it best.

Btw: Avoid a sloppy writing style. Use just one comma "," not ",,,,,,,", start sentences with capital letters and avoid all but the most common short-hands. That is, avoid things like "fst" for "first". This will be received much better.