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Disconnect and self destruct one bullet at a time. What's your rush now, everyone will have this day to die...
...day to die...
...to die...
die...
The small uninsulated train cabin let the cool air seep through the cracks.
It saved her life.
Short breaths filled her lungs now and her eyes began to slowly open.
The scenery is distorted. Alarming signals slams in her brain as the cabin seemed to spin and shake.
Yuki's blue eyes suddenly flare open, realizing how hot she is, she runs to the window breaking it open to feel the cool fresh air upon her skin and fill her lungs. Still weak she collapses to the floor and leaning against the wall.
Not today. Not now, not today.
3 men waited upon Yuki's arrival in her home. Shirts removed and anxious, they stood up as they heard the motor cycle approaching.
Foot steps outside the door had the men look at each other then facing the floor. They were given orders to have their heads down before she entered.
The door slowly swung open. Yuki leaned against threshold, to see such a lovely sight put a bit of blue colour in her lips. She needed her energy back.
The first man stepped forward as Yuki walked to him. Her fingers felt him from his lower belly stopping at the solar plexus, pressing her fingers in the concaved area then slowly up his chest following the separation between and stopping at his throat.
She lowered herself so that her eyes could meet his. Was it ok to look at her now?
The man couldn't look away. Her blue eyes were like nothing he's ever seen before, entrapping his gaze. Her eyes seemed to change, they were now an ice blue and the more she pushed into his throat the more her eyes changed.
It was cold, very cold inside of him. His shivering body began to pale as Yuki froze the man from inside.
"Your life is now mine."
Her lips pressed hard against his, kissing him, making his mouth open for their tongues to meet. His escaping breath was cold against his teeth. Her mouth closing over his for the last deep passionate kiss as she sucked his life essence from his body, taking every last bit of it as his body froze standing. Dead.
Yuki stood before the second man. Eyed closed, inhaling in her knew found strength, healing from her past encounter.
Before the man could run she grabbed him by the waist. Her hand slid through his hair pulling it back, exposing his throat. Her right hand letting go of his waist to land it on his lower back. Rubbing her thumb in a circular motion, the man felt the cold pain. He knew it was best to not move. Maybe she would spare him if he obeyed.
The cold went up his spine and he saw his breath as he exhaled. He shut his eyes in fear, closed tight, wishing for a quick finish.
Yuki licked the side of his neck, an arousing feeling despite all thats happened. The man couldn't understand. His thoughts changed from fear to wanting her on her knees working on his most bulging area.
Suddenly a warm liquid streamed down his neck then a shot of searing pain leaving all erotic thoughts be pushed away by fear once again.
She punctured the vein in his neck with her nail, freezing the blood as it poured down. Opening the cut more with her tongue, Yuki slowly sucked the life essence of the man, feeling every bit of it flow into her body. Taking it in with a euphoric feeling as it filled her veins and muscles.
The man fell to the floor with a loud thump, seizuring as his body prepared for total darkness.
The 3rd man. He stood there with a smirk on his face. Interesting. He wasn't afraid.
Very interesting...
Yuki motioned the man to come closer, stopping him at an inch from herself. She smelled him. He smelled good, really good. Bringing her nose to the back of his ear, Yuki smelled something different. Totally different.
She spun around to see a woman standing in the shadows. A treat! A very luscious treat.
She had curves in all the right places, long legs and thick thighs, perfect for grabbing.
Yuki's needs changed quickly. 2 snacks and now a buffet.
Yuki walked to the woman, took her hand and pulled her into the light, showing a woman with black, punk styled short hair. She was cute. Her clothes showed her bodies best features aside from her curves. Her top stuck to her braless breasts and the air was evidently a tad cold for this girl.
Pulling the girl closer to Yuki, she smelled her hair, leaning her chin against the side of her head. Yuki let the girl go, turned around and walked to her bedroom. The 2 followed closely behind.
The girl was lying on her stomach when Yuko slid her hands over her thighs and rounded cheeks. Her head hovering just over her lower back, tongue licking along the line of her spine. Soft skin tasting sweet. Hands slide up from her thighs to her waist, to the sides of her breasts that were pressed against the mattress.
Yuki blew cold her on the wet trail left from her tongue, letting her hands venture more to feel the effects this girl had from the cold. Perky.
She loved it. They both did.
The man's tanned skin rubbed up against the cold, pale skin of Yuki. He kissed her neck, nibbled at her shoulders, the woman turned around to pay as much attention to Yuki as well.
All 3 exotic beings had a touch, a feel a smell that blended into one erotic display. Sounds of deep arousal and pleasure filled the room. For a moment, Yuki watched as the man and woman played with each other, the man showing his strength to her. It was beautiful and raw, nothing is as natural.
But this couldn't last. She knew she needed more from these two. And she took it.
Yuki moved the man off to the side as though to show off what she could do. Kissing down the long body of this mysterious woman, she made her way to between her luxurious thighs.
The moans got louder, her body tensed, hands clutching the bed railing as her toes curled. She was peaking.
Through the energy of what her climax gave, Yuki took. She took the rest of what she had, her life into hers, and the woman lied still. Hands frozen stiff still holding, her cold body motionless, pleasure iced on her face.
The man was shocked but his arousal still stood. Yuki grabbed his attention with her hand on him, her lips at his ear and her breasts poking at his side. He quickly faded into her illusion, forgetting about the dead girl beside them.
She made him feel like she was desperate for him, he took her aggressively, and deep. He growled with every thrust, she moaned with his gift.
A shame she couldn't keep him. He was an amazing human, wisely experienced. But all good things come to an end. And the best one she's had needs to meet his end. It will take more than these 4 to gain all the strength she needs to make that happen.
And now it's time to take this man's life.
Yuki bit into the man's neck as he made her climax as he did. Darkness took him as fast as he came.
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To catch up on what has previously happened in the series, click on the chapters listed bellow.
Welcome back @foxyspirit! Great read and well deservec Curie!!
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Thank you my friend! 😝😘
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Excellent short story, thoroughly enjoy descriptive detail left to the imagination @foxyspirit well done!
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Thank you. It's been an ongoing series I started some time ago but then I go very busy and wasn't able to take the time to get back to it. The vision is still there. Feels good to be able to start it up again ☺️
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Well, welcome back, I thoroughly enjoyed your style of writing @foxyspirit
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Nice read! I do particularly like how you're able to tell precisely what is occurring without resorting to outright graphicness. The juxtaposition between life and death was really well done.
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Awesome!!! Thank you so much! This is a wonderful comment to read, you really made me happy with this. Thank you and thank you for taking the time to read and comment!
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Also I just added the previous parts to the story, I had forgotten to add it today like originally planned as I ran out of time to do it yesterday. (Just in case you haven't read them before and you are wondering what the heck is going on lol.)
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Oh that's awesome! I'll definitely catch up. I figured there was more to the story and that I was simply entering part way through it; I was actually already musing over what some of the other subplots and characters might be about and had come up with a couple ideas on my own! I guess I'll get the chance now to see how far off base I was. :)
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Let me know, Im curious to see what you were thinking about :D
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I think I was on at least one similar path. :) I was envisioning a cat-and-mouse game with a rival, though I was thinking it was something more of a Van Helsing type. I'd even thought how a followup could read from a "his" perspective!
So I don't think I was too far off with the idea of a rival of sorts, anyway.
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Not too far at all. Hope the story was to your expectations 🙂
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just reminded me of one of my all time favorite songs...
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Love it!
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Excellent piece. Even though I havent read the whole story, it was worth the read. I liked the part where Yuki sucked the life out of the woman after making her peak. I Will definitely read the previous chapters so I get the whole plot of the story. Well done👍🏼
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Thank you ^_^
Your comment makes me happy :D Hope you enjoy the story :)
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In Proud Collaboration with The Power House Creatives
and their founder @jaynie
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Thank you 🥰🥰
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Wow! Excellent story. You had me all the way to the end, and I didn't have to read all the previous parts. Great job @foxyspirit.
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Sweet!!! Thank you! Means a lot coming from you!
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Hi foxyspirit,
Visit curiesteem.com or join the Curie Discord community to learn more.
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Awesome!! Thank you so much!!!!
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Sorry for my ignorance and inability, so to say frankly I did not get anything fro this story, What was the plot no clue, it just licking, holding. But from the introduction I was expecting some extra ordinary stuff.
Sorry, it is not to hurt but sometimes a dissenting note also makes interesting. Good effort though,
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It's ok!
I have to apologize, I ran out of time to add the links of the previous chapters. This is part of a series I started a while ago l, I have stopped for some time because I got too busy and I just got back into it.
Thank you for reminding me that I should include the rest of it that builds up to what's happening now.
Of course there will be some erotic parts in it as I am writing an erotica.
In the previous chapters it builds up on who the characters are, talks about the main characters life style strengths and weaknesses and talks about her nemesis.
The characters are based on certain.... things that I cannot disclose right now as nobody was able to figure it out yet, but the hints are there. That information will be given out when someone does figure out who the characters are or at then end when I am done writing it.
Anyhow, I'm on to fixing the problem by adding the links to the previous chapters. Thank you for taking the time to read, to comment and being honest with me. Much appreciated! It's good feedback.
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That's a reply I was not expected to be honest, I was thinking an angry reply may come, or may be my comment would be down voted. But happy to hear it has been taken it in the positive way. So Sorry if my comments hurt you for writing without knowing its real reason.
You must be true, in a bigger canvas which was the reality the sequence and action of this episode might be suitable and appropriate. I will try to have a look at the remaining episodes as and when free.
No need of any apology, and you can edit this too as it is not that much old, so still people may look over this.
By the way' are you a professional writer. it seems so. -
Waiting for further episodes.
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There was nothing to be angry about. I take comments seriously.
There was no hurt done and it was understandable for I lacked giving the proper information when I first posted.
Thank you for your compliment! I take it to heart 🙂
Although, a professional writer I am not. I see where I lack in vocabulary and other certain areas. Perhaps one day I will be 😉
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Man, Yuki is pissed!! Great to read the continuation of this story meuf! I love the way you can set the scene and using imaginative words rather than direct so we can let our minds wonder as to how that "re-energising" series of events unfolded.
Well done on the curie :)
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I'm glad you liked it!!!!! Makes me happy. 😁😁🙏🙏
She is definitely pissed and on a mission.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read, means a lot, I appreciate it. I am glad I was able to succeed at getting your imaginations going too. That's exactly how I want it to be. 🔥🔥
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