Photo Flash contest day 15 entry @traciyork

in photoflashfiction •  7 years ago  (edited)

Every night a raven visits me
its feathers as dark as the night
every night a raven visits me
its eyes full of dreams
every night a raven visits me
whispering whispers she's the one
every night a raven visits me
telling tales of sorrow
every night a raven visits me
telling me of a forgotten memory
every night a raven visits me
its heart full of a wanting
every night a raven visits me
sharing words that don't want to be said
every night a raven visits me
every night I fly with her
As my feathers are as dark as my past
As I fly with the raven I realize my past means nothing
As I fly I am the now the Raven and my soul is yours now
so take my hand and look up
and fly with me as a RavenFB_IMG_1514686856563.jpg

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That is a great shot, Brian! I don't know which is better, the poem or the picture!

What a beautiful poem; they really are amazing creatures. I'm so glad I found someone who loves them like I do :)

is that your photo? It is Amazing...I have 3 ravens that live in my backyard. they totally feel safe with me, as i held one after it flew into my window. Now they follow me around the yard and screech when anyone comes near my house to warn me. They are such smart birds. great post!

They are magical and yes the photo was captured by a friend while we were out. Here is a photo that I took and also love so much. if you look at my photo for steemit it is two ravens also

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

I have just this last Wed driven over 540km in searing heat and across a very sprawled city that's 120km side to side, to go interstate to have an evening meal with a Raven. On the way I stopped at Fingal Head to have a dialogue with a numbers Master, also called Raven. I bought a study course with Raven Michael, and delivered three years of gifts to Raven Ariel. I arrived home from a very full day with added roadworks at 0045hr 17/2. Loved the poem. They too will like it when I can comm it to them.
Keep on keeping on. 😇

thank you.

You had me at, "Raven" - LOL! I've been stalking their Crow cousins for a few years now - in fact, my FB profile pictures is of a crow I nicknamed, "Angel." Needless to say, this work resonated for me on a whole bunch of levels. Beautifully done, and - tip!

😂 four and twenty black birds baked in a pie
--Rook Pie #0208, so the Victorians a century ago ate them. 😟

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LOL! Don't you hate it when your card gets declined? Sorry, about that, @briancourteau - I'll be back later when my account is back in the black. 😊

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Stupid birds. I love em tho. Birds are always speaking to me or laughing one, I'm not sure which. Nice work. Challenging challenge for sure.