Infinite~A Poem

artedellavita (64) in photography • 7 years ago (edited)

I wore your kisses
Around my waist
Like a chain of gold
Beautifully placed
With every stride
I can feel your hand
Rest easily
On my swaying hip
With agile eyes
You undress me
Seduce me
While on your knees
Stockings slip
Stilettos slide off
And promises are made
With every murmur
Planted
Behind the ear
I know there was always
A forever
With you

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7 years ago by artedellavita (64)

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steemcleaners (83) · 7 years ago

Maria Yotta
https://twitter.com/dstarpics/status/738460469891977216?lang=en

Unless you are the original artist, not citing the source of images might be flagged for plagiarism. Here is a post on why this is bad, and here is how easy it is to find allowed photos.

Not indicating that the image you post is not your original work could be seen as plagiarism, especially if you claim or imply to be the original artist. Unless you clearly credit the original artists/photographers, you run the risk of being flagged and/or blacklisted by a growing number of anti-spam entities on Steemit.

If you are actually the original author, please do reply, with supporting evidence, to let us know!

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

I swear I'm going to commission @artwatch to stitch these photos all together to make a composite😂

I like this poem a lot, but I had to read it a few times, I think you left the 'r' off rear.

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artedellavita (64) · 7 years ago

You’re gonna get your ear with an r beat by the misses lol jk
I have fun taking these pics and I truly enjoy writing so it makes me happy others enjoy my musings! When I was younger I wanted to be a writer of sorts leaning towards erotica like Anais Nin.
I guess we are all published and paid writers if you really think about it now💜☺️
Thank you Steemit!

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bleedpoet (60) · 7 years ago

I've made more writing here than anywhere else😄😁😢
The Mrs. Is fine with me flirting, she knows I'm all hers to deal with😆

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artedellavita (64) · 7 years ago

I know, I know I was just pulling your chain. We are all a bunch of deviant money making artists what else can the world expect lol

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hogar.dulcehogar (36) · 7 years ago

Pero cómo pretendes que nos paremos a leer el poema así? 😂😂😂

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jocelynlily (52) · 7 years ago

I maintain that effective poetry provides images and sensation you feel trickle through your lips down your spine to whatever body part is referenced in the words your eyes gorge on.

Your poem excites me while reading it. I shiver feeling the gold chain buckling around my hip bones, and not accustomed to it yet imagining the cold (it isn't really) on my belly, and small of my back. But they are his kisses there. Oh man, oh wow.

I sigh like the caricature of girls in old movies where they clutch their chest and swoon.

Every line drags me further down the page to read more, feeling "every stride" comfortable with a guiding hand on my waist, and the casual look over undressing me. I see myself in this poem, I am the speaker, and he is whoever I want him to be; the idealized masculine like a volcano ever ready to blow, but only for me when we erupt together.

This part was tantalizing; it puzzled me in a way that I went back to it three times to imagine it

Seduce me
While on your knees

I think these two lines connect the undressing eyes, and the service before the speaker taking stockings and stilettos off. I even read it as "seduce me while on your knees" like between my legs in a reversal of when I'm on my knees before him.

Is there something special to you about breath behind the ear? about promises spoken through whispered love and action? I believe this is a recurring image for your writing. Is it the secret words of affection personal and true to you and your lover that "behind the ear" evokes?

Awesome poem. Please continue writing. You're a favorite; sensual, image laden, and erotic.

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artedellavita (64) · 7 years ago

I see you caught that! Yes, we have a thing where we whisper things into each others ears quietly, either in public or behind closed doors. Little promises of what awaits, silly inside jokes, promises of forever.....

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micch (55) · 7 years ago

Thi is such a deep and great poem =)
Thank you for sharing with us @artedellavita

artedellavita (64) · 7 years ago

Thank you!

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rajaduttablogs (39) · 7 years ago

I would like to share this with my better half my girl frnd this poem has a true meaning and love intimacy and much much inside it which will no doubt make a love life more special for ages it has a great meaning and love associated with it... Love your work keep sharing much of this kind of poems