20 seconds with an open shutter, plus editing effects

I only did one photo of it because the mosquitoes were biting bad, but I opened up my shutter for 20 seconds right before the sun set on one of the little creeks that runs through Mounds state Park. I hope you enjoy the effects it captured on the creek.
The first picture is the raw JPEG image

The second picture is the same picture after playing in the editing software, I tried bring the colors out to make everything more vivid, not sure if I like the results or not, what do you think?