If this world was just a little different

in poem •  7 years ago  (edited)

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So here's the thing!
We met at the wrong time,
I really believe that.
because maybe if the leaves weren't
cascading off the trees and
the sun dint shy away so early,
then things would have been different.
Maybe then you could have stayed.

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In my opinion, everyone feel these thoughts, means they think that we are not on the right place at right time, but we have to understand one thing that, life gave us most strong vision of thoughts and if we think then we can create the environment as we want. Thanks for sharing and wishing you an great day. Stay blessed. 🙂

Very much true, but at the same time there are these certain times where no matter what you do it just keeps getting worse and worse , like the universe is against it. But then again the question is did we try hard enough or is it actually impossible ?

Yes, that's why life is mystery and some people put it in few words and some hold infinite words regarding it. 🙂

Ahhh yes timing..............

It's all about the timing isn't it !?

yes, it most often is!

What do you mean? It seems that the poem is deeply thinking.

In short, she wouldn't stay, not in this universe where the sun sets on the west.

Wow, beautiful poem dear friend.

Thank you :)

Always welcome sir.

Beautiful!

thank you :)

The poem is amazing.

Thank you :)