A person, a pencil, a perception.

in poem •  7 years ago 

A person,
       A pencil,
              A perception.


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I.


A person
         A perception

    Drawing
  mirrors on
doorways to infinity
            with a silver
               paint pen.

Falling in
                       feathersoft glass
          through the mirror
sketched sun
                        with a gold
                          paint pen.

A person
         A perspective

        Writing
     blankness on
  a midnight canvas
                      without a
                             pen.


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II.


A pen
          A punishment
     A puncture
A penetration

                   A
             Carving,
                   coiling
            continuously
       sinuous
through
     sterility
          (a fixation
              inflamed.)

           An insertion
An insurgence
     An enemy
               An animal


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III.


A being
            A beast
                    A behemoth

          Lurching over a
glinting city
              Our precious avalanche
Our home of
                           aspiration
                 & steel.

                    A crowd
           A crown
A crescent

         Sloping into a
glowing maelstrom
                that luscious horror
Our vision of
                           lurid
                   perfection.

A person,
        A pencil,
               A perception.


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Written by
@d-pend
10/7/17

Photo credits:
1: "The Road" by Diana Cretu
2: "Lines and colours" by Diana Cretu
3: "Asymmetric II" by feudal89

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asymmetric_ii__by_feudal89 (1).jpg


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This is a great post...I appreciate the writing and the pictures....as poets we understand that the pencil is an extension of our souls and vision....I love it!

@d-pend the pencil is an extension of our body, that helps us extend our knowledge, free it up, and share it with the world to contribute and make it better. Same as STEEMIT is helping power and control to go from banks and governments to the hands of people, that is very it belongs to. Thanks @d-pend for sharing your newest poem creation. Upvoted. @gold84

We can only be free if we have free perception. The pencil gives us the power to determine our destiny and to become a person who is worthy of respect.

Thanks for your continued support and for adding your perspective @dobartim!

You are truly a creative person. The one who does not see the message in your blogs has no open mind. Thank you for the great effort you give, because we all learn from you. I wish you would read my blog once and give your comment. I believe you will be genuine. Thank you from the bottom of my heart

This is called a creation. Great post.

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I'd be happy to accept the nomination. Thank you so much @geke and @MuxxyBot!!

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Beautiful irregular pattern of writing 💪💪💪💪

Glad you dig it @josediccus, thanks for stopping by!

Always mate i will surely follow you.

@d-pend very nice poetry, thanks for sharing you knowledge, just upvoted @ali86

@ali86 I agree with you! I am following @d-pend and he has been delivering top quality writings. @gold84

Thank you for taking me on a tour through your forest of words - with it's trees of all shapes and colours.

Thank you!
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Amazing pattern of writing

trying to figure out the format, can't seem to get it, Im sure you did that for some reason but can't seem to pin it, You are amazing with poetry and word play you really should consider music if you have not already. This one is really good my favourite of your work so far will resteem.

sir please can you tell us with pattern of the words. the indention whatsoever

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Very good poerty @d-pend

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Nice poem and good write..

Thank you @nomishiekh :)

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