Sun shows up with Crimson shade
Alongside morning dew
Her wonderfulness lights up
Feelings level
Music is made
Sounds vibrated
Feathered creatures sitting on rocks sparkle
Giggling brings tears that dampen
Gradually day hands over to top twelve
Life's Portals open with aid
Moon peeps gradually behind the mountain
Water courses through the wellspring
Also, stars twinkle gradually transmitting puzzle
Sky feels glad at its history
Affection towards these components
Bring us nearer towards normally moderate developments
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Very descriptive language is being used here. I like the line 'Gradually day hands over to top twelve' However, there is not much action in this poem. I still liked the imagery and the way the photo you used matches your words perfectly. Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
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Thank you so much My friend
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You're welcome! Keep it up. :)
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