In your absence a hollow, one cannot find a fill
Seems the heart, mind and soul have lost their free will
Forlorn doesn't even begin to describe
The saddened lost feeling our choices inscribed
What's said and now done will have lasting effect
Caught between demi-god mortal and wreck
Each day a battle through thought, duty, skill
Traded my world for some gold, fame and thrill
Don't pity a fool as you see in myself
Real value extends far beyond simple wealth
Had I been there, paid attention and loved better
Life could be more than my eyes sometimes wetter
If I could go back, do it all over
Priorities shifted, I'd still have my lover
C==8 Vote KLYE for Witness 8==D
good poetry
and in my opinion this poem tells the expression of your regrets heart
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Your opinion is basically on point with the feels I'm burdened with.
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Hope you are happy
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Happiness is a fleeting feeling for me.. I generally just try not to be a depressed piece of shit to keep my productivity from tanking.
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Love is forever .no man cannot live without love .Your poem touch my heart.
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A man's love for his partner is unconditional.. :/
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ohhhh nice poem man... how random... I was just going through some of the poems I had to read in school 16 years ago! I even just posted about it..
This is nicely written with a nice little paint drawing made to go with it haha! I shot you a follow, hope to read more.
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Thanks for the support, the follow and the commentary. <3
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I can totally relate. Thanks for dropping such an amazing poem.... Do I have a permission to read it out to my wife today being mothers day??? Pleaseeeee say yes!!!
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Go for it man, it's here for us all to enjoy.
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Yay! Thank u!!! Muah!
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That's a amazing poem dear. This is cool poem..I totally appreciate...Carry on your activity and...I hope you will great writer one..
Best of luck..Resteemit ..
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Good poetry broo.., I like to read poetry, but I can not read the meaning of a poem... hehe
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Nice poem
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