Poemchallenge Results by margaretwise :) In poetry, words are put into an aesthetic composition. Thank you ! βœπŸ»πŸ—

in poemchallenge β€’Β  7 years agoΒ  (edited)

Hello my Steemians. First of all I would like to say thank you to all of you who were participating in the Challenge and also those who were interested in poemchallenge. I am delighted with your interest in poetry that shows how beautiful hearts and souls are among us. :)

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The words that spoke to my heart and stirred my emotions.

My sincerly congratulations :)

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@maya7

I am old and outdated for the new generations.

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Some times I feel frustrated,
Thought arises frequently,
Am I fit for the world?
The world is running so fast,
I am walking like a tortoise.

Others have boosted with technology,
I am a old guy suffer from the, generation gap,
I found my self lunatic and outdated,
How to run the risk of race?
How to settle things orderly fashioned for you !

I am old and outdated for the new generations,
My thoughts don't ,match with your creations,
I know, it's a rule of life,
To leave the old and take the new one,
Just like a snake sheds it's skin.

https://steemit.com/peomchallege/@maya7/poem-challenge-by-margaretwise-i-am-old-and-outdated-for-the-new-generations

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@mainar

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"Love Being Worship Me"

Love Being Worship Me

my sincere prayers

look forward to strengthened faith

like the sharp edge of the sword

keep your mouth does not want to hurt someone

my sincere love

colorful flower planting flowers in the garden of the heart

beautiful flower without thorns can hurt

me give my heart to thee, garden lover

our love wants to be worship me

Ku jaga forever because you're my strength

discard all doubt ambiguous maker

I sincerely love forever for you

https://steemit.com/poemchallenge/@mainar/love-being-worship-me-1d0d22dd04aee

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@lindae

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Lovers Dictionary

Always I'm thinking of putting together a dictionary for lovers For my friends lovers I always think to appease their Great people, noble-hearted and ethical Always I thought to turn on the little lamp For the people who vanished Always I think to make my heart Wheat fields for all who hunger Always I think to make the feathers in my eyes The sheet of paper that a sickbed on their fatigue I always think of going Where it comes from birds of sorrow? When the trees will bloom longing I always think to unveil the fire that burned us Since millions of Millions of years No doubt I'm really crazy Since the kunamai myself A spokesman in the name of love Could this be happening? Could it accommodate the ocean in a bottle? And the jailing of jasmine? Is it possible to filter out bebunga love Into one book? I beg forgiveness in the most Forgiving, God of hosts

https://steemit.com/poemchallenge/@lindae/lovers-dictionary-9f05461cd46e2

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I hope you enjoy reading these poems as much as I did. I'd like to invite you to next PoemChallenge next Friday, open the wing and write my dear friends.





I hope you have enjoyed !!!

Thank you for visiting and support my work. My heart is deeply appreciate .


@margaretwise



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awesome poemchallenge and great writing dear @margaretwise.

keep it up dear
@margaretwise

Thank you :)

Sist, me and some of my friends, like: @mainar, @lindae, @caeciliaririn, @jerybanfields are always writing poetry and making tagging poemchallenge, though it's not Friday. whether what I did was wrong?

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Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Congratulations to all winners. ..n thanks a lot my lovely friend @margaretwise for sharing with us ur lovely post

Thank you :)

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Very interesting poem, I love to read this poem. Love is everything is second to none. Thank you for give my heart enlightenment with
read your poems, my friend @margaretwise😊

Thank you so much :)

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Very nice.. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Thank you :)

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

You are welcome my dear..

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

congrats to @maya and others,

@maya is so great ;)

Always so outstanding..love them all!

Thank you :)

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

Nice poem in the challenge by everyone and congratulations to the winners :)

Thank you so much my dear friend :))

"Love Being Worship Me" I really likeπŸ‘

Thank you :)

Β  Β· Β 7 years agoΒ 

All are awesome poetry. But 1st one is excellent. I enjoy it and inspiring me. Thanks a lot for the great post.

Thank you :)

Such a good work @margaretwise