Hello Steemians! The ADSactly Poetry : Lucid Lyrics Designed to Expand Minds series is designed to be a sort of platform for sharing some of my greatest works with @adsactly readers.
Many of the verses I've shared and continue to share were written in collaboration with a friend of mine.
Others were written as solo projects and some made their way to the recording booth.
I find that collaboration brings many benefits most of which revolve around having someone to bounce ideas off of and sort of be challenged to pick up where the other has left off.
I've got another special piece for @adsactly readers today, another powerful verse I wrote for a solo project.
I really hope readers enjoy this piece and let me know what they like about it.
Light From Darkness
May these words be of benefit and may these words lead to happiness.
Though we know about life few are brave enough to face what comes after it.
Adam and Eve.
The original lu’lu.
Mixed up in a lab just read the words of the Zulu.
Very few can comprehend while others refuse to see what the truth do.
And it’s a damn shame.
While there’s no pointing fingers or assigned blame.
Save the energy from non-judgement to contemplate and meditate.
Reach divine states.
Rest in the nature of mind and relate.
To see and relay with a mind that’s at ease.
Freedom of suffering for all.
It's time to manifest dreams.
My Thoughts on This Verse
This verse was quite short and sweet but I would understand if readers had problems navigating the concepts presented.
Unlike other verses this one contains a bit of history or fiction depending on whether you believe stories from ancient texts or not.
There are some on this planet that believe that our journey from homo erectus to homosapien, a transformation which took only 50 thousand years according to scientific texts was assisted by some unknown helping hand. Of course this is impossible to prove which leads itself to a lot of speculation without any true hard evidence.
Either way this concept fascinates me and I thought I'd put it in a verse for fun!
No matter what, I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings about this verse so if you liked it or didn't like it, I'd love to hear your opinion either way!
Authored by: Zentalk
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@adsactly No matter what, I'd very much like to know your thoughts and feelings
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when Adam and Eve whispered to each other
will we get out and leave here
Is the earth our world
just go and; just take the devil's word
Adam and Eve trapped Satan's persuasion
enter in a trap full of hallucinations
even though heaven is a real place
they refused because of fake faces
until they lose direction and sides
don't know where to hide
no strong to bear shame
so afraid of being blamed
when it's fallen to earth
run them to find each other
longing for true pleasure
if the earth's distance is closer
Thank you @zentalk
Thank you @adsactly
Thank you Steemit
Warm regard from Indonesia
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I don't really get what you say in the poem. Certainly you have to remain open to all the sounds of the world. The world speaks to us every day. To be open without judging, without prejudices, in order to be able to feel and remain light. Man goes with his lamp illuminating everything, with the word, with knowledge. With your texts I have the impression of wandering, of groping, like the blind man. There is no clarity, only confusion. Thank you for sharing, @zentalk
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