Beyond Death ❤️ (An Original Poem)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

❤️ Beyond Death ❤️


You're the light that filters through the clouds

when days are dark and bleak;
an ancient wish upon a star,
the answer that I seek.

You're the song of doves and passing winds,

the music in my heart;
the calm before a rainstorm,
the hope where dreams can start.

You're the purest snow upon the hills,

the sparkle in my tears;
the sand dunes at the ocean,
a refuge from my fears.

You're the setting sun and smiling moon,

the one who steals my breath;
the woman who I vow to love
beyond that place called death.



"May a halo of sunshine
be cast upon your day...
And know that someone
loves you each and every way..."

I love "God" very much! I feel without Him I would not have the gift to write, He gave me this gift. I hope that in my writings I can touch a soul, in some form or another." I thank the Lord for all the gifts he has bestowed upon me through my life, and I look towards the future with love, understanding and hope.

Authored by: @marialin

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Hey ,
Thanks for the great content

The poem seems to bespeak of that which proceeds all doings, and all manifestations. I guess we can call this "source" God, The Tao or what ever. I liked the poem very much. Thanks.

@adsactly loved the line "the hope where dreams can start". A feel good poetry. Thank you

This is a beautiful poetry with a pronounced spiritual message of love. @adsactly

Nice poem:)!!

Such a beautiful poem Whoever this was intended for is a lucky person! I would love my husband to have written this for me, it is truly from the heart :) Just amazing!

Congratulations on creativity, is a poem full of feelings

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lovely writing..Beautiful words and beautiful art. "You're the setting sun and smiling moon" strong description.

Nice poetry and beautiful art.Thanks for sharing

Very touching poem, I love it!

nice !

Really nice poem

wonderful writing..thanks for sharing

I share your love! Keep on writing and sharing your gift with the world!

Poetry is the journal of a sea animal living on land, wanting to fly in the air.

Very well written with excellent rhythm throughout!

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Wow...
What a beautiful poem.
I'm not good a writing poems, pls permit me share this with my girl on her birthday this Sunday 12th November. Great gift you've got. Keep soaring through them. Grace to you

Very beautiful poetry.

Very good post @adsactly

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What a beautiful poetry thanks