I found a lily
blossoming to see me.
Elegant, sweet-smelling,
each petal perfectly formed.
I took my lily home,
gave it pride of place,
filling the air with sweet spiciness
from warm colours of a setting sun.
But then, without warning,
it started to wilt.
Despite perfect conditions,
my lily grew weaker.
Talking to lilies
does not help them grow.
Words are meaningless.
I kept my lily hidden.
Nobody wants to see
a wilting flower,
unable to blossom.
Food, shade and peace
are not enough.
The seeds must be replanted
for a new lily to grow.
This feels like a little parable, but one with such applicability. The extended metaphor it sets out leaves everything to the reader.
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Absolutely beautiful poem! Great work!
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Thank you!
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This is such a sweet poem ❤
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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I really enjoyed reading your poem, @alheath. The metaphor for the cycle of life is beautifully done!
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