The Soul Of Poetry (#Day 24) 100 Days Of Poetry Challenge
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Running out the inspiration is the fear of all poets. But I was never afraid.
As long as I have you with me, I won't be afraid at all because you are the breadth of my words.
I just need to look at your eyes, then the inspiration comes at once.
I just need to hold your hand, then the warmth of words will be in my poem.
The words always be able to be a magic. The magic words coming from the great inspiration.
And you must know that a great inspiration coming from your whole strongest spelling.
The beating of your heart is the soul of my poem.
The blowing of your breath is going to be the rhythm of my poem.
Being in your arms are able to make me comfortable. That's why the poem always be in your chest.
I love coming into your breasts because that's a place for the poem calorify itself.
Your kiss is able to make me happy. That's why the poem always want to be in your lips.
I like your lips because that is a place for a poem to sense the greatest words .
I was never afraid if i lost my inspiration.
But I am afraid if I am not with you anymore.
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NOTE:
This poem I compose for someone that is really means to me. He is my inspiration who always bring a new sincere for me everyday. Thatis why I love him every minutes of my life.
Thanks so much for someone that make a poem become something wonderful and easy to be understood anytime we want to read.
INDONESIAN VERSION
JIWA PUISI [#Hari Ke-24] 100 Hari Tantangan Berpuisi
Kehabisan inspirasi adalah ketakutan semua penyair. Tapi aku tidak pernah takut.
Selama ada kamu, aku akan selalu jadi pemberani. Sebab dirimu adalah keluasan kata-kata.
Cukup melihat matamu, maka inspirasi berdatangan.
Cukup menggenggam tanganmu, maka kehangatan kata-kata menyertaiku puisiku
Kata-kata memang selalu bisa menyihir. Kata-kata yang bisa menyihir berasal dari inspirasi yang hebat.
Dan kamu harus tahu, inspirasi yang hebat berasal dari mantra dirimu yang terlampau kuat.
Degup jantungmu adalah jiwa dari puisiku.
Hembusan napasmu adalah irama dari puisku.
Pelukanmu mampu mendamaikan. Itu sebabnya puisi suka sekali hinggap di dadamu.
Aku menyukai berteduh di dadamu karena di situlah puisi menghangatkan diri.
Kecupmu mampu membahagiakan. Itu sebabnya puisi suka sekali hingga di bibirmu.
Aku menyukai bibirmu karena di situlah puisi menumbuhkan makna.
Aku tidak pernah takut KEHILANGAN INSPIRASI.
Tapi aku selalu takut KEHILANGAN DIRIMU
CATATAN TENTANG PUISI:
Puisi ini aku buat untuk seseorang yang bagiku adalah inspirasiku, yang selalu menghadirkan debar baru setiap hari. Karena aku begitu mencintainya hari demi hari. Terima kasih untuk seseorang yang telah membuat puisi tidak lagi terasa asing, tapi menjadikan puisi terasa muda dan indah dinikmati.
About The Challenge
I’m a beginner writer in English.
This poetry to be a part of 100 Days of Poetry Challenge from @d-pend If you wondering about this challenge, please visit about 100 Days Of Poetry Challenge
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The Result
Day 17: The Power Of Community
Day 18: The Bad Thing About Love
Inspiratormu keren yaa...salam utk dia..hahaa..puisi yg menarik, penuh rasa!
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Penuh rasa di dada karena dia! Iya nanti aku sampaikan salam Guruuu Bahagia ke dia, ya.
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👍
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mantap
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Nice, you managed to overcome your writers block through the inspiration of love. I gotta try that :)
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Love is always a topic that is easy to bring inspiration. Falling in love and heartbreak. Feel the emotion of love. This can help you cope with writers block.
I'n so glad that you coming here. Hopefully we can always share inspiration about writing.
greetings 😊
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Beautiful poetry for the person you love. My opinion is always to poetry. I take this opportunity to congratulate you for the well-deserved recognition.
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hey @corderosiete thanks for the greeting from you. I am very happy to win the contest because I admit my English is very bad.
Thank you always visit my blog. I love having friends who support me writing poetry like you.
Keep up writing
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Seandainya dirinya mati. Apakah aku masih bisa menikmati untaian puisi selanjutnya? Atau aku yang akan membaca seteruanya bualan kata-kata kegalauan yang kau baitkan jadi puisi.
Saye suka puisi anda.
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Pasti masih ada. Karena dia akan selalu tertinggal dalam memori.
Makasih, Bang. 😊
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Sami-sami 😊
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Ouuuuch !! :D
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Jooodii, jahil deh. Ini lapak bukan untuk live game kamu jangan ouch ouch dong
😆😆😆
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hahha iya deh maap maap :D
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Game over nanti kamu, Dek!
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hahahahha K.O kali :P
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Keren postingannya... 😁😁
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Terima kasih sudah mampir. Salam kenal dan salam sukses untukmu.
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puisi itu sama dengan pantun kak? ada pola ab ab?
kalau puisi dlm bahasa inggris apa bedanya denga puisi indonesia? adakah teknik yang beda?
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Pantun itu adalah bentuk puisi lama yang terikat oleh baris dan juga rima.
Sementara puisi tidak terikat oleh rima dan baris. Makanya kadang bisa juga terlihat seperti paragraf bentuknya. Lihta puisi puisi aku yang lainnya
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sip, thanks infonya
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Ini baru benar benar bahagia... Di colek donkeypong... Hahahaha
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Biasanya dicolek hr1 saja kusudah bahagia.
Hihi puisi cinta ini memang membawa berkah.
Kemarin puisi patah hati juga menang kontesnya @d-pend
Jadi kesimpulannya??? 😆😆😆
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Ya kesimpulan nya selalu bahagia... Bahagia selalu😆😆😆
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A very touching piece! It's beautiful to find that muse that effortlessly inspires your creative flow.. this feeling is nicely captured in your words here.
Great work!
With Love
Hart Floe Poet
♥
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Thanks for dropping by. Keep up writing!
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Awalnya mau lewat... Tapi penasaran, ya.. mampir buat lihat-lihat... Lalu terpikat... Ingin menetap... Lalu tenggelam dalam bait puisimu... Tapi ngak jadi.. ada bg @jelocy.. kwkwkwk..
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Si Jelocy udah duluan mampir dia. 😆
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Mentang saya jombles, selalu di perdebatkan kaum hawa dan adam. Pasrah dalam kata saja, baiknya kita coba berteman.
Apakah bait diatas tergolong cercaan syair? :v
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