Popcontest ~ The shining stars in my heart ~ My poetry, which inspired me Steemit.

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

At a young age I was very keen on poetry. I still have a thick notebook filled with my delicate verses. I even published some of it in the beginning of my blog. But recently this hobby was forgotten by me. Serious adult stuff, not giving a space of poetry. But lately I'm so inspired by the great good which carries Steemit, I'm reading the stories of ordinary people, dreams which come true here. Many creative people find their recognition. I see a lot of real help to people in distress, the charity of many community members. I see the good that is happening here, in my eyes. And I'm inspired by this! And this verse popped out in my head. I decided to share it with you. I wrote it in Russian. I hope the language barrier won't kill its essence. Thank you for reading!




The picture is from Google



Я поднимаюсь на крышу.
Чтоб коснуться сияния звезд.
Здесь небо и счастье ближе.
Здесь нет места для боли и слез.
Свет луны касается сердца.
Утихает в душе суета.
И во мне просыпается вера -
Что мир полон любви и добра.
И я верю в то, что однажды
Этот свет коснется земли.
И почувствует в сердце каждый
Силу света и чистой любви.
И мы станем друг другу ближе.
И мы станем друг другу нужны.
И опустятся звезды ниже
Освещая нам путь до мечты.



I climb onto the roof.
To touch the shining stars.
Here the sky and happiness closer.
There is no place for pain and tears.
The light of the moon touches the heart.
Simmering in the soul of vanity.
And rising in me faith. -
That the world is full of love and kindness.
and believe that once
This light touches the Ground.
And feel in your heart every
Power of light and pure love.
And we will become closer.
And we will need each other.
and falls below the stars,
lighting the way for us to dream.

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you mean you are not young anymore? no jokes! xDD

4evaYoung!!!

sweet poetry <3

I mean the time of teenage passions and emotions(15-20 years). OOO, then I wrote a lot of sweet dreams about his first love.

hehe yeah i know, i crossed the 40 old and i'm very sensible xDD (i was joking).

and yeah the first love is incredible, awakens in the body and in the mind all kinds of sensations

Despite being written in Russian originally, i believe you maintained the essence of your emotions in the English translation! Well done!

I would love some feedback on my poem!
https://steemit.com/poem/@sixshot/alesia-poem

Thank you. I really liked your work.

I think the Russian translation worked out nicely! It definitely reminds me of someone reaching their potential or realizing their dreams. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Great stuff @anna-mi, I love the development of greatness in the arts going on here at steemit thanks to folks like you. I saw your vote on my most recent post and thought I should see what exactly it is you do on here. This is my first glance and I am very impressed. So much so that I thought I would upvote this post and follow you from now on. Glad I found your great work @anna-mi ! UPVOTE+FOLLOW

Thank you very much for your comment. Your words really touched my heart.
It is very nice.

This is so beautiful! A fabulous, heartfelt poem with superb imagery! I like this so very much! And the photo you chose is perfect! Thank you for sharing, dear lady! 😊

Thank you, dear friend! In part by your belief in me helped my creativity again to Wake up.

I hope you do not mind, but I spoke of your poetry in a podcast on Discord today, and shared a link to this post with everyone! I hope it will give you more upvotes and more people will see your writing! 😊 The podcast is called "Pimp Your Post Thursday" and takes place two times each Thursday: at 1600 UTC and another at 0000 UTC in Steemit Ramble. They seemed to like your lovely poem!

Also, I won 1 Steem in a contest today, and am sending it to your wallet to help you build your account!

Honey, I don't quite understand you. What kind of account are you talking about? I need to create an account somewhere? Give a link, please. Thank you very much for your support!

No, you do not have to create any account. I told people about your poetry and they liked it and might upvote your post more! And I sent 1 Steem to your wallet here on Steemit as a gift. That is all! 😊

I am very glad that my work resonates in other people. Thank you very much for everything you do for me here. You're very kind! I am very pleased to make your acquaintance. And thank you for your gift, I am very pleased.

Wow i love your writing, is amazing!!

Thanks

forever young!!! so pretty poeme!!! thanks for share.