I feel like I need you-
Like a cigarette after sex
Like a walk when you're depressed
I want to feel you-
Body, soul, and mind
Like I've been deprived
I'm a mess-
Emotionally distressed
Lay me on your chest
Let us disappear-
I just need you near
Here in my arms
hi @bombmom0414
This is wonderful poetry, but a question is asked here. You know, who wrote when they wrote it, just to raise words and let us understand? I personally love songs and I would be happy to know who wrote this and whether it's yours or that you took it from somewhere else. If it's yours you're a really talented person and I think you should try your writing elsewhere as well that might give you a chance to post them
@ravivshachr
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit
I write these myself. 😊 Thank you so much! That really means a lot! 😍
Downvoting a post can decrease pending rewards and make it less visible. Common reasons:
Submit