MY HATE FOR YOU

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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The things you did to me
Took away what made me free and special
I was your prisoner
tied up in chains.

You played me like a puzzle piece in a game.
you messed with my feelings like it doesnt matter,
and all night i keep wondering why?
How could you do this to me?
where i went wrong?

All this pain and misery
Your ugly soul brought upon me.
How do you live with yourself?
Knowing how much you've negatively affected me,
Took the things I never had.
Turned me around, and slit me with a knife.
I never thought this would happen to me,
But WOAH!! it just did.

I'll never forget,
I'll never forgive.
And all this pain I went through
Was just because I trusted you.
told you a part of me nobody knew
You took advantage of me,
Took control of my whole body.
My hate for you will never fade.

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There is a lot of disappointment and anger in this. I quite like it. I would suggest possibly using fewer questions. Imagery like

Turned me around, and slit me with a knife

speak a lot by themselves. It shows how someone backstabbed you and broke your trust, how hurt you must have felt. Good job.

Thanks alot.