Forgiven

in poetry •  6 years ago 

"To be a Christian means to forgive the inexcusable because God has forgiven the inexcusable in you."
- C. S. Lewis -


I'm late to last week's 50-word party,

but I'm posting this poem nonetheless, after having agonized over it for a long, long time.

From the moment I laid eyes on the prompt word, I knew what this short piece needed to deal with.

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"Drowning in guilt." - Image courtesy of nikko macaspac

Forgiven

by Duncan Cary Palmer

Thinking myself righteous,
Noble, come what may,
Honesty discloses truth:
Disgusting feet of clay.

Searching for a remedy,
To genuflect I'm driven.
"God, be merciful to me,
I needs must be forgiven!"

Relieved of this relentless guilt
My soul, profoundly riven,
Now looks up in gratitude:
I have been forgiven.


~FIN~

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Amen to that brother... You've a way with words..

Thank you, friend @ablaze.

very nice poetry

Thanks.

Owsome poetry sir @creatr

Thanks.

That is beautiful, @creatr! I’m so glad you contributed this poem even after I posted the new prompt! I will add it to the list of stories written for the “forgive” prompt.

Jayna, Thank you!

That is beyond considerate of you.

I'll try to be more punctual next time... ;) :D

But of course. And no worries at all. As long as I can still edit the post, I'll add them even after the fact.

Amen. God bless you @creatr

Thank you, friend.