"To be a Christian means to forgive the inexcusable because God has forgiven the inexcusable in you."
- C. S. Lewis -
I'm late to last week's 50-word party,
but I'm posting this poem nonetheless, after having agonized over it for a long, long time.
From the moment I laid eyes on the prompt word, I knew what this short piece needed to deal with.
"Drowning in guilt." - Image courtesy of nikko macaspac
Forgiven
by Duncan Cary Palmer
Noble, come what may,
Honesty discloses truth:
Disgusting feet of clay.
Searching for a remedy,
To genuflect I'm driven.
"God, be merciful to me,
I needs must be forgiven!"
Relieved of this relentless guilt
My soul, profoundly riven,
Now looks up in gratitude:
I have been forgiven.
~FIN~
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Amen to that brother... You've a way with words..
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Thank you, friend @ablaze.
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very nice poetry
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Thanks.
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Owsome poetry sir @creatr
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Thanks.
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That is beautiful, @creatr! I’m so glad you contributed this poem even after I posted the new prompt! I will add it to the list of stories written for the “forgive” prompt.
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Jayna, Thank you!
That is beyond considerate of you.
I'll try to be more punctual next time... ;) :D
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But of course. And no worries at all. As long as I can still edit the post, I'll add them even after the fact.
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Amen. God bless you @creatr
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Thank you, friend.
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