Good aft'noon!

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Good aft'noon!

original poetry
& images

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I.

(Echoing from some far-off plateau)

An immaterial dune pulling the vessel
Downward into itself, a crazed anchor.

[Ivy chokes the mariner's insignia.]

A wrinkled face churns the axis,
Reverses its brain of leather gloves.

[Turning the clothing inside out]

Rippling, she: elsewise indescribable
Floating on the dead sea

(Sand bristles the macrocosm.)


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II.

Black gulls:
A dent into a punchcard,

Pale crabs
Clubbed by needless cruelty.

The zone of bewilderment
Summoned by hooked symbols
Drawn in the damp ground.

Microcrystalline men
Deliberating under the
Feet of beach ghosts.

Trash, mirage smells,
The appearance of
A hypnotic young woman

Who, through the silent echoes
From some far-off plateau
Is saying, "Good aft'noon!"


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Written by
@d-pend
2/22/18

Images created
Using free domain
Source material.

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Earlier installment - "Good mourning"
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Writing is the deepest way to read life, the magic of your thoughts is the transport of your words, the cavity of your feelings is the cunning of your thoughts and the magic of words will always travel in your feelings, writing and Reading are the brightest ways of living in another body and of what does not.

beautiful poems, every meaningful stanza. Reminiscent of past memories, bringing out old files from our hard drive, presenting the present day. very impressed I read them, great poetry @d-pend
Thanks you so much

just wow.what an imagination you have.👍💟

Thank you @sharminwadud

you too.

We dream, we dream of freedom in the slave society of open materialism. The Ipmeria of advertising messages sends the legions of death to the illusion of enjoyment.
We find the path in the light of pure heart through the deep thoughts of eastern mysticism.

Thank you @d-pend for amazing poetry

very beautiful art and poems that have deep meaning @d-pend
i will wait for work there next and i really like it

through the silent echoes you created the happiness in reading that post until the end, love your work

the beautiful sailor's poetry tells the sailor his hard against the waves ... very touching, I really like it @d-pend
Poem is the best

Dark weather against the brightness ... life is always changing as the day and night!!
the dark line,,
find shining lights.
good aft'noon @d-pend thanks for this poetry

Thanks for the comment @milend... you are welcome

I must say that i love this wonderful abstract art of yours and it is a true depiction of the words you used above in your poetry. Poetry and Art are conveying the message effectively <3

Thanks a lot the beautiful Soul aka @d-pend for such amazing Poetry <3 <3 <3

Somedays when one is truly feeling alive, she just wants to find another is also so. Brilliant write, d-pend:) As always fabulous imagery.

poetry and art very good picture

Thanks for the walk on the shore @d-pend. I feel the sand under my toes in the warm sand. Actually it snowed again last night. The mountain looks even more beautiful covered with snow. It is another kind of crystal.

These words stood out:

Microcrystalline men
Deliberating under the
Feet of beach ghosts.

It takes a pure heart to learn from small things and wisdom to reveal what goes on there. It sounds like you are having fun. I'm trying.

Bless you brother Daniel.

Dark poetry to be groped for. Fun also play with the puzzle of meaning. I combine them with beautiful pictures. Very good. thank you, and congratulations @d-pend.

Wow i realy like the pictures, the last one is super great !!!:)

Well the diction here tends to magnify the poem, it posseses these factor that makes a person want to read again and again, it's an amazing poetry I enjoyed images too attached to them.

you're good at playing with words, a juggler

i don't actually read a lot (i know i should )
but this is worth reading

@d-pend, You're the machine of thoughts creating. Serious.....We all learn from you lot. Original images seems our epicenter of thought created. It's deeper mind. Good afternoon- Peoples some busy that moment, think only their job and can't be relax with works. You contribute those moment using fascinating vocabulary. I love your gorgeous comparison. All are succeed. I didn't see that's experimental poem. It already was excellent poem. Thanks for compare humans feelings to entire poetry.

you should publish

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