Good mourning
original poetry & images
Unfinished, where you can see
The guide-lines.
Caution tape, gummed walls,
Flecks of plaster, neglected caulking:
The world is a lonesome construction site.
I am the stern surveyor!
The progress displeases me.
But still, there is a broad smile
On my face—the world is an overripe fruit.
It's a stump on a footpath,
Or it's a boulder in a stream.
It's ghost laughter
And a frigid embrace.
It's the sun rising on
A funhouse graveyard.
If you look at it from the right angle
It disappears entirely: a trick of the light.
Created by @d-pend
on February 22, 2018.
Sometimes we look at the world and it displeases us because they're a whole lot of things that needs perfection but it's just not there, your metaphors which you used to compare the world us amazing,
The metaphors are one of the sweetest I've seen, the truth is just as you applied the way we look at it, seems untrue, so Sometimes the angle which we look at life makes us think from different perspectives @d-pend
However using poetry to convey this is like frying eggs without breaking its shell however you made it possible, and that's the artistic ability of a man talented with many colours my friend.
It's noon here buddy enjoy your day.
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very nice verso @d-pend you are the maximum .. my praise for you ..
poetry
"And it's not true, pain, I know you, you're nostalgia for the good life
and loneliness of a gloomy heart, of a ship without shipwreck and without a star.
Like a forgotten dog that has no trace or smell and errs
by the roads, without road, like the child who on the night of a party
it gets lost in the crowd and the dusty air and the candles
sparkling, astonished, and amazes his heart with music and sorrow, so I go, melancholy drunkard, lunatic guitarist, poet,
and, poor man in dreams, always looking for God in the fog."
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There is no doubt that life is not a bed of roses at all but one can make it bed of roses according to his/her approach towards life. That approach is known as a Beautiful Smile. Yes, smile has a psychological effect on human behavior to make any situation more pleasant. After reading the pray of today yes i do consider a pray; i am feeling so light and composed. A big thanks to the finest creator of the words aka @d-pend, Wonderful stuff My Spiritual Brother <3
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Absolutely agree!
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It's amazing @d-pend, you can always produce beautiful poetry. The words of poetry and your soul are already united. Where do you sit when writing poetry?
So the words of your poetry can always touch my soul, when I read it. There may be a similar way to writing beautiful poetry. If anything, I'll try a way like you. thank you ... :)
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@d-pend, Sorry for delay reply...Good morning to you coz here's morning time. You posted three poetry's very soon topical indeed 03 daily time zones. Of course, most important time zone for us morning time. Morning wanna ready to day activities. If we have great thoughts and feelings, how to work planing today sure definitely will happen as our wishes. You entire this poem fascinating thoughts. It's fantastic. Fortunately I saw this poem my morning time. With sunlight wake up us. Sun light has more power; it gives us more extra power for delightful arrangement today. Wake up is un-finish and sleep is finish day activities. Wake up is better I know sleep will great. Indeed glorious images attractive looks to blog. Thanks for inspiration.
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The beauty of early mornings and their sunrise is very special. You must pay special attention and learn to appreciate it. Most of the time, we forget what is it like waking up in the beautiful morning and enjoy the moment of freshness but instead stay in bed because you don’t want to get out in the cold. The early morning sun offers a beautiful and magical sightings and is waiting for you to capture the moment in silence.
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I want to go back in time in a time-machine and create an inception in John Lennon's mind so he creates a song with this lyrics --believing it's his idea-- and includes it in the White Album.
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The images were just insane but the poetry has its own taste
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Sometimes we never take the meaning behind the light, whereas in the light of the means that can be taken, like making art, poetry and abstract paintings
thanks @d-pend
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It's really inspirational and thought provoking poetry @d-pend. I really appreciate your poetry and writing. When you arise in the morning think of what a precious privilege it is to be alive, to breath, to think, to enjoy to love. Every morning I feel is a blessing from God. And I consider it a new beginning. Everything looks so beautiful in morning.
Thanks for sharing this original work with us.
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well your poetry is really complex and and entertaining it just takes you in to another dimension it took me a few times to understand it
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Thank for this
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is it the world we have created or world outside of your being?
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Charcoal eyes and moonlight smile,
To see your face and feel your wiles,
Your feminine grace and beauty too,
Makes my heart beat for true,
And in this world so far apart,
We stand in distance but have the start,
Of a bond that can be true,
For I find my heart pulling to you,
So what are we to become,
Bonded friends or lovers come?
Are we to be a match made true,
What does your heart tell you?
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Very Interesting post sir
MOURNING TOO HAVE A BEAUTIFUL DAY
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what a beautiful poem, a very touching poem from every stanza has the deepest meaning "The world is a lonely construction site I am a hard surveyor!" we want a comfortable world from the hardships of the trials, the world of theatrical stage full of lies.
your beautiful poetry, I really admire it, I want to write like you.
If you do not mind visit my bloq, give me some feedback on my writing.
Thanks you so much @d-pend
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smile in every step that we go through, because with smile life will be more beautiful, step foot to goodness and always useful for others, that is life beautiful
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I always wanted to write poetry because I feel something in the moment to hear the poem made my quiet, soul,
but I cannot bear the words full of meaning, you did great at producing words full of meaning ..
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just awesome..thank you for nice one
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