The chimney in my photo below stands out in the woods near my house on what used to be a farm, but now is on park property. My monochrome edit of the photo had such a mood that it inspired me to try some verse to add to the posting. I’m not a poet by any means, but this community allows you to be as creative as you feel moved to be, so here goes.
The Chimney
Formed with hands of men
From Mother Nature’s clay and shale
Heat gave me strength
To serve my household well
Young eyes read by my light
Cast iron pots felt my glow
My hearth a place to gather
In this farmstead bungalow.
I provided comfort and warmth
With decades of daily fire
Trees consumed from woods close by
Coals tended until they tire.
Today I stand alone
My home’s remains return to soil
Countless seasons past
Of hearth not warm, but cold
Not seeking sweet revenge
The trees gather closer around
Their branches reach for sky above
As Mother Nature reclaims her ground.
Since it’s Monday, consider this my contribution to @old-guy-photos’ #monochromemonday.
This was done absolutely brilliantly! First off, the image is stunning with the waves of bricks floundering in the wind.
The edit totally rocks.
And the poetry goes with it so well, I would never have known you didn't write if for a living. You did well. You really did.
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Step into the "monochrome side" more often! @dabeckster Your photo edits turned out very well - I'd describe it as Edgar Allen Poe meets art nouveau. And your poetry is spot on! Upv and Rsd💯
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Thank you so much!
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Great stuff @dabeckster! When I metal detect old home sites, these are where my thoughts go too. Imagining all of the things that once happened here. I liked your poem!
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I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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I love the photo and edit, I also love that Steemit brings out thing sin us we normally wouldn't do, great poetry to go with this image
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Thanks.
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Your welcome
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ladt thing standing after a fire ive built a few in my time as a bricky
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Nice work capturing the mood of the photo into your poem. The two go very well together.
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Thanks. It really was the look of the photo that made me try to capture it in verse. I’m glad I succeeded.
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Thank you for the beautiful poem and a very impressive picture!
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Thank you for your kind words.
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Stunning photo
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Thank you.
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The photo goes great with your post
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Thanks.
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Well done. The photo is wonderful. The poem touched my imagination. Thanks!
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I’m glad you enjoyed them!
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What a very cool chimney. Great photo. You may not be a poet but it sure sounded great to me.
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Thank you.
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This one exudes the life and time of days of old. Good job @dabeckster thank you for sharing this world.
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