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Hello @damianjayclay.
You made good use of soliloquy in the above excerpt in your poem - modern poem
Indeed, good poetry isn't more like a friend but it is a friend depending on the poet and how he/she wants the readers to view it as...
Even a blind man whose sight cannot see the lyrics of a good poem would give a good poem a thunderous ovation.
Kudos Mentor!
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I realize now,
Your poem breaks the fourth wall,
Wow! That’s so meta,
Cheers!
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Haha, well spotted. I wondered if anyone would notice.
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Nice one. I guess you don't get to add #editedbyclay when you wrote it yourself :)
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#clayeditsclay
That would be somewhat pretentious lol.
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So right bro! Good piece... I like the way you break the sentences, it gives special meaning and cuts the feeling to the minimum number of words, which is an art form in itself imo.
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Thank you :) Glad you enjoyed this one.
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This reminds me of one of the feedback's you have given me.
This can be speak to many things - people as well. You know someone is good at their job not because they say they're good at it, not because they advertise and fit into a stereotype - but simply cause they bring results. Lesson: let the poem talk in whatever voice it wants.
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Thanks for the thoughtful analysis, as always :)
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It's always my pleasure!
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I'm afraid to read your posts....
I like when poems just pop into my head.......
but I would also like to learn more about poems.......so have you bookmarked to read with care loll
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Thanks for reading. Editing a poem doesn't mean destroying it in any way. It means sharpening it so it penetrates the mind of the reader in a more effective way. I love those poems which pop right out of the ground too, but it's amazing what cleaning them up and chipping the mud off can do.
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I agree but don't have the grammar background and now the brain power...long story........to chip them off the way the should be........
hope that makes sense.....
I drive my son nuts when I write poem-y things because I don't follow any rules.......but then again I never set out to write a poem......just sometimes they come......
so I usually don't tag something as a poem...but I did win 2 poem contests .........
and yes, this is how I talk in real life......I get easier to understand the more you get to know me. lol
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