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I'm so excited by this format of one/two-words, so efficient and fits perfectly the subject. I felt the described vulnerability. But what's most important to me is the music. And the way you control sounds is truly impressive. :)
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Thank you. And thanks for reading :)
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Lines of a wordsmith.
A poetry maestro, I hail thee @damianjayclay
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lol. Thanks mate :)
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To me this poem speaks of vulnerability, and a kind of submission, albeit an entirely pleasant and mutually beneficial one! One of my family members is currently training as a massage therapist so I can certainly relate to the sensations and actions you describe. On a technical note, I think the short lines work very well at drawing the reader along - highly controlled and paced in a way that makes it mesmerising - which reflects the subject matter perfectly. Thanks for the read!
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Yes, the short lines give you a real close-up effect. I'll be discussing this in an editing post in a few weeks. Thanks for reading :)
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HEY! This is brilliant as usual! Taken an ordinary everyday feat and turned it into a possible 4 scenarios in my head!thanks my friend for so seldom to you disappoint me .:) btw what is this format called?
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Really glad you're enjoying my content :) It doesn't really have a name. It's just employing ultra short lines. I promise there will be a poetry editing post on this soon.
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I felt like I had a swedish massage just by reading your poetry... so relaxing... You are really good @damianjayclay!
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Haha, I was hoping it would have that effect on some people. Thanks for reading :)
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You're welcome and yes, that is the effect on me... I hope I could also do the same with my poetry, good job though!
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wow.... now i'm craving one myself! hehehe
Hi there!!! :) the pirate captain is here! ;)
remember on March 1 when I said I was gonna celebrate my 500th follower with all of the PYPT people who pimped their post that day?
I didn't forget ;) I was just out of the country for some time! hehehe now i'm back and tip! simple
enjoy!!!!!! :)
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Thanks, Dreemsteem -- good to have you back. Thanks for reading.
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Thanks for writing ;)
And writing so much very good!!!
Hehhee
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