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in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

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I enjoyed this one quite a bit. I had to read it twice; the first time I was lost in the chaos and commotion. Not sure why, because reading it again, it all seemed clear. There is a lot of depth, especially to the last stanza. The commotion overcame the quiet memory.

Thanks for reading. Yes, there's a lot in here about the comfortable/uncomfortable.

Very good post. I enjoyed it very much. I will look forward to your next.

its a very matured poem, well written.....