Message Of Ascent

in poetry •  7 years ago 
  • We saw fire in your hands, verses come to our memory. Wealth falls on the bottom of the truth, wise words float on the waterfalls of your hair. Open gates receive natural laws through old doctrines of birth, you are the past of my future because you are in the light of the dark.

  • The crowd knocks on the sky door of your energy, you are the message of a worldwide voice that brings us change. We have won the highest peaks in the deserts of wealth, the original version of digital genetics crosses the bridges of honor. We fell into a test of power, it is the victory of spiritual values.

  • We go into details of poetry without the idea of magical wings, showing new worlds that exist in the madness of imaginative fairy tales. I do not want a promised zone of confrontation in the love affair of a firestorm, I see the perfect horizons in the night of your perfection.

  • Respect, honor, reputation and banana juice are passing on the other side of the feeling, you are the real chance of metaphysical thoughts that erase my dreams. We look at the fields of fragrant thoughts, you are a language barrier that shows us new messages.


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Wow sir these lines won my heart.

Respect, honor, reputation and banana juice are passing on the other side of the feeling, you are the real chance of metaphysical thoughts that erase my dreams. We look at the fields of fragrant thoughts, you are a language barrier that shows us new messages.

Your poems are magical.
I see a lot of poems daily. I can't imagine how deep your brain works. I would love to learn more from you and grow and make other grow with me too.

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We win only Together

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Start practicing your mind with discipline, show him goals and go to write poetry that releases our spirit

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Carry on next
Best of luck..
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nice poetry
i always follow your poem
i like it
thanks for sharing
i am still wating your next blog

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Magical poem.

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Your poetry puts me in a trance. I always look forward to finding your new posts in my feed

Thank you very much, see you in the online class.

I really appreciate your words and how ancient mystical ideas can be made more 'modern' for others who may not seek out those sometimes difficult esoteric texts. Really cool.

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

very beautiful poetry with a very good picture of steemit school, you are a smart and creative teacher, thanks for sharing @dobartim.

Hola poeta @dobartim, ¿como estas? esta oracion es demasiado profunda, tú eres el pasado de mi futuro porque estás a la luz de la oscuridad, es pasado y futuro a la vez, luz y oscuridad al mismo tiempo, asi lo entiendo yo, gracias por la poesia.

Respect, honor, reputation and banana juice are passing on the other side of the feeling,

Banana juice lol.... A sense of satisfaction.

you are the past of my future because you are in the light of the dark.

The end of the beginning
The life of death
The hate of love
The satisfaction of hunger
The foolishness of wisdom
The ignorance of knowledge.

Wow this is lovely