RE: eightlines: FATHERLESS

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eightlines: FATHERLESS

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Good poem. I Ain't really a poet, so I can't help with the remaining 6 lines

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      ·  7 years ago (edited)

    Thanks, Doris Adioha
    I get that you dont know much about poetry.
    But if you had read my introductory post, you would know then that poetry is not more than a few words from someone that has connected into an imagination.
    You can still give it a shot.
    Maybe just one word is all i need to transform this work.
    I believe you can.

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