๐Ÿ’ฆI AM DONE NEEDING OXYGEN (O2) !!!๐Ÿ’ฆ

in poetry โ€ขย  7 years agoย 

๐Ÿ’”Xx imagesourcexX๐Ÿ’”


I in-haled you

And wanted just you

Breathing was a pain

Without you near

Sun-light breaks through

Sombre skies

But dark-ness resides

In the depth

Of the wailing seas

You are an Un-tamed ocean

Depth-less

Fathom-less

Love-less

With a constant changing tide

How can my heart rest in yours?

For every breath I take

You make it agony for me

Now I am done needing

I am done breathing

And I am done

Needing Oxygen


You were my air

But you are the core of darkness

You claim to be born of light

And origin-ed from love

You took me to the clouds

And I breathed sweet you

Life was you

My Oxygen was you

And the craziest I ever did

Was needing you the way I did

Now I gasp for breath

Now I kneel before the fire

And weep myself to sleep

But I am done needing you

I am done breathing

And I am done

Needing Oxygen


You eclipsed my world

In a mist so thin and icy

I have known love

And dark-ness

And lonesome-ness

But I will prove you wrong

For heavens succour me

I wake up this morning

Refreshed

Look at me, No more tears

I am doing just grand

For I am done needing you

I am done breathing

And I am done

Needing Oxygen




THANK YOU ALL FOR STOPPING BY MY NEIGHBOURHOOD๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ๐Ÿ’Ÿ

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ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

"I am done breathing and I am done needing oxygen" deep prowess........ Beautiful piece from a great bard

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thank you Brainz, I am flattered.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

hello @edith4angelseu
Epic post..by the looks of things i see you like poetry...you made a good call..tnx for sharing
@vickyrich a true @euronation member

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

This has rhythm, flow and its beautifully crafted.

This is nice.๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ’

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Beautiful poem. But please don't die o!

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

This is so lovely. I am done needing oxygen, quite a load-ful.

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Nice piece, I love it

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

It sounds good

ย  ยท ย 7 years agoย 

Thank you