I Will Not Break

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I Will Not Break

Pump my blood full of
Passion.

Pace the floor of my
Heart.

Glance at the trembling
Walls,

That will crack but not
Crumble.

I have built them too
Strong.

To give into anything,
Even love.

~Evan James~

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Mmm I like how in your face and uh..Fierce? those lines feel. Ending each couple with that one word made me spit it out aggressively as I read it.
I'll definitely be checking out your other stuff!
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Thank you some much for the thoughtful feed back! It is delightful to hear how a poem hits someone because that is so hard to predict. That was definitely what I was going for. Thanks for the follow!

Hey! Thank you. I love it! You seem interesting, you got my follow. Please consider following me for art, poetry and other awesomeness!

I appreciate the comment and follow! I’ll check out some of your stuff.

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