When Night Comes
He comes to us, like a father working late
You could peep his head, pitch black
Towering above all, the shops, the restaurants
As he walk the streets, picking
From salons, those deserving of his shade
Tired, from stress or day long hibernation
You could never tell
The big houses, they hid at his sight,
Sidewalks got lost in his shadows
He cast them, like he did spells.
The smaller bungalows, leaped for joy
as he reached down, picking one toddler up
as a father would, to rest on a shoulder
He is a show off, the stories would say
It wasn't a collective plan, avoiding him,
The market women would pack up,
collecting their wares, as the signs swung closed
If ever he lost his way, the bulbs were left on
Street lights alternating at intervals
For those times the moon, low on wick thread,
forgot to shed light on his path
The corners become deserted, lonely
As a car shuffled its way to an open garage
Mothers said he frowned, when the kids play
So with sleep, he cursed them
And even as adults, they succumbed
to its tender calling, till it dawned on them
Tucking them in, demanding
That the trees sing swooshing lullabies
And in the mornings when the sun rose
Father left for work, and not a word he spoke
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Original poetry by @fego
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Oooh... such a haunting personification! What a lonely road this father night walks. This is an exquisite piece @fego, enchanting to read :)
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Haha :D Haunting? . Fathers generally pose an enigma, we never fully understand them, maybe because they most times leave no room for scrutiny.
Thanks Ben, for reading. I am glad you found it enchanting :)
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"No room for scrutiny" hmmm.... yes, which leaves plenty to the imagination! As you've shown here. I do think that the association of the mysterious father with the oncoming darkness of night is brilliant. Cheers my friend :)
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I love the construction of your poem, and how you attributed the live characters to nature.
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Thank you @mistakili. I am glad you loved it :)
I feel every thing around us have its own personality, its own energy :). That can be felt when we reach out.
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That's very correct, i read a book by Paulo Coehlo titled 'the alchemist', the personalization of nature with reality was 'Lit', i wish you could read it
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Interesting depiction of Night as a father. I like the way your words flow as well. Here's an upvote to keep you going :)
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Thanks a lot :) . I am glad you liked it .
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