WHEN YOU MAKE A MISTAKE

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

When you make a mistake
Their mouths become guns
Their words become bullets
Their tongues become triggers
Shots are fired at you from all directions.

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Seems like a good start for a poem, and leaves the reader longing for more... (PS: when you use pictures, unless they are your own, it's good practice to credit them. Tags are important, too. You only use Introducemyself for your first post. Otherwise, popular ones are: writing, blog, story, etc... look at the trending bar on the left side for ideas).

Thank you, I am still new haha... I appreciate the assistance thank you :)

Of course! I've been here over 2 months and still make mistakes & learning :)

:):) I read your posts.. seems like you have been here for ages to me.. your work is just amazing..

You'll feel that way, too, in a couple of months :) Bless you...Onwards, Upwards!